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[fic] Falling Apart

Jul 18, 2006 15:49

Title: Falling Apart
Author: creepy_crawly
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing (if any): Yonkashi (Yondaime/Kakashi)
Rating: Mmmm, PG-13
Request: Made by darlingfox, a YondaimexKakashi where Yondaime survived the Kyuubi attack. Full request can be found here.
Disclaimer/Warnings: Naruto is the property of Kishimoto-sensei. Warning, this contains Yonkashi. Yondaime’s only 7 years ( Read more... )

yaoi, fanfic, kakashi, naruto, yondaime

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macey_muse July 26 2006, 20:19:44 UTC

Hmm. Where to start.
Well, this is exactly the type of fic I'm incapable of writing *applauds* I love all the intrigueing details. Like little Sasuke - 'when she said' WHAT, dammit! That was mean. Now you'll just have to continue this as a multi-parter so we can find out what happened to Sasuke because he was premature.
The C-section made so much sense. How likely was it that Naruto just -happened- to be born at -exactly- the right moment for his umbilical cord to be available for the sealing? An elegant solution.
Oh yeah. Back to the annoyingly-tantalising details - the whole orphans thing in Kak's solilquy! 'lined up for the Hiddens ... the jig's up...' Argh! You can't just dangle hints and then not go into depth... *pouts* Evily-all-powerful authors...

creepy_crawly July 26 2006, 22:49:41 UTC

Thank you!!!

I've always had problems with that convient birth thing. Off and on I've toyed with it being because of a severe change in air pressure due to Kyuubi's overwhelming presence (such things seriously do send women in to labour, I swear) or some such thing, but then I was just like, 'eh, screw it. C-section, damnit.'

*giggles* Actually, I'm thinking about adding more into this world...I've got something already written in the idea of the Hiddens, so stick around with me, and I promise you will see more.

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm very glad that you liked my story!!

And on a totally unrelated note, I love your icon.

macey_muse July 27 2006, 08:45:53 UTC

Yay for more fic!
(And, ditto on the icon. You've no idea how long I've stared at it, trying to catch Demyx's thingy. Although, yeah, Donald = ew...)

creepy_crawly July 27 2006, 19:48:00 UTC

Demyx: Making Rockers Cry For Mommy For A Long Time

I actually know of some really...freaky...KHII slash.

As in, like, brain-breaking. I can link you, if you want.

macey_muse July 27 2006, 19:51:05 UTC

Linkage is good :D
Although, whilst we're on brain-breaking: -The- hottest R-rated fic I know just happens to be Charlie/Willy Wonka. With Charlie most decidedly doing the chasing.

creepy_crawly July 27 2006, 20:04:08 UTC

*shivers*

I've left the link in your LJ.

macey_muse July 27 2006, 20:10:12 UTC

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2234800/1/
G'wan. I dare you. After all, I'm being open to KH brain-breakage ^_^

creepy_crawly July 27 2006, 20:16:38 UTC

*grins*

*clicks*

I seriously must learn to resist dares. *shakes head as she trods off*

macey_muse July 27 2006, 20:24:43 UTC

Believe me, you won't regret. The thing about pairings like that is they scare the heck out of anyone even the slightest bit insecure in their writing, leaving only the good authors behind.
That thing actually sent me looking for more.

creepy_crawly July 28 2006, 19:09:59 UTC

So it's like a math formula...

The worse, the better? An inverse ratio!! *cough* Working on my math summer work. Can you tell? XD

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