one-shot
Title: I've Paid For Your Mistakes
Fandom: Papa Roach/Atreyu
Pairing: Jacoby Shaddix/Alex Varkatzas
Word Count: 3823
POV: Third
Rating: NC-17
Summary: After a terrible fight with the wife at home, Coby ends up at the Muy Thai Kick Boxing Gym hoping to curb his anger and relieve some stress but when curiosity gets the best of him, he ends up with ( Read more... )
Fandom: Papa Roach/Atreyu
Pairing: Jacoby Shaddix/Alex Varkatzas
Word Count: 3823
POV: Third
Rating: NC-17
Summary: After a terrible fight with the wife at home, Coby ends up at the Muy Thai Kick Boxing Gym hoping to curb his anger and relieve some stress but when curiosity gets the best of him, he ends up with ( Read more... )
The dark haired man could smell the masculinity from the other, sweet and pungent all at once and made him want to lick Alex from the sharp curve of his jaw bone to the dark trail leading into his pants down from his belly button. oh my god, who doesn't want to? *drools*
I think you have a few run-on sentences somewhere in here.
like this, Alex hissed and the older one could feel the others blunt nails digging and raking into the skin of his shoulders causing such a mixture of pain and pleasure he did what the other asked and threw his weight up into the blonde pulling a cry out of him and knew he found his target. like.. I'm thinking there could be one or two commas in there, or maybe it could be split into two sentences to avoid confusion.
oh, and I'm pretty sure you got the eye colour mixed up.
otherwise, yummm. I've developed a thing for this pairing, and that totally just made my night.
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and yessss. i had way too much fun making alex all godly like especially when he was working out. i really should tame my own fantasies oO
and thank you. i should go fix it. it was seriously like 4 a.m but my muse wouldn't leave me alone!
as for eye color ive seen Coby with green eyes more then anything and i have a pic somewhere where Alex's are startling blue. each their own though :)
thank you!
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