Rough Outline

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I've created a general outline for "Baby's Still Mine". It's more for me than anything else as I'm sure most won't necessarily get much out of it. But thought I would post it anyway just so you could all see where I was thinking of going with it all:



Baby Still Mine Rough Chapter Outline

1. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - lazy Sunday Morning browsing real estate section
2. Keaghan/Neve - discuss AI; Neve is anxious and unready
3. Keaghan/Redmon - upset Neve wants to wait
4. Neve/Selene - Neve expresses fears re: AI
5. Keaghan/Liam - father/son outing
6. Keaghan/Neve - house hunting
7. Keaghan/Neve - revisit possibility of conception; Neve still no; Keaghan frustrated
8. Neve/Liam - mother/son outing
9. Neve/Mena - doctor’s appointment; Neve expreses fears; Keaghan in dark
10. Neve/Keaghan/Liam - family time
11. Keaghan/Mena - Mena calls for Neve; Keaghan suspicious
12. Neve/Mena - pre-AI prep
13. Keaghan/Neve - Keaghan finds info on AI realizes he’s been kept in dark; Keaghan/Neve argue; Keaghan leaves & stays out all night
14. Neve/Keaghan - Neve worries all night; Keaghan comes home (was not where she thought)
15. Keaghan/Liam - bedtime story (wedding)
16. Keaghan/Liam/Neve - distance between parents; Liam notices and is his usual inquisitive self
17. Neve/Selene - discuss issue; Selene aptly points out how Keaghan must be feeling (re: history repeating)
18. Keaghan/Redmon - discuss issue, giving Neve space to move at own pace
19. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - annual trip to beach house (gift from Keaghan for wedding)
20. Keaghan/Neve - 1st real in depth conversation about conflict
21. Keaghan/Liam - Keaghan teaches Liam to surf
22. Neve/Liam - Liam bedtime story about his daddy saving them; Keaghan overhears
23. Keaghan/Neve - discuss movement on AI issue; Keaghan acquiesces on issue but is saddened by it
24. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - Keaghan still sad and distant
25. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - housewarming party
26. Keaghan/Neve - discuss baby; move forward
27. Keaghan/Neve/Mena - doctor’s appointment
28. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - dinner chatter
29. Keghan/Neve/Mena - AI procedure
30. Keghan/Neve - procedure fails
31. Neve/Keaghan - discuss disappointment
32. Neve/Liam - playtime at the pool
33. Keaghan/Neve - discuss second procedure
34. Keaghan/Neve - AI procedure #2
35. Keaghan/Neve - discuss viability of moving forward; Neve depressed
36. Keaghan/Redmon - discuss disappointment; discuss concern for Neve
37. Selene/Neve - visits at Keghan’s request to check on her
38. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - Liam’s birthday; Neve still depressed
39. Keaghan/Neve - Keaghan says no more AI will adopt
40. Keaghan/Neve - AI procedure #3
41. Keaghan/Neve/Mena - news that procedure takes
42. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - family time
43. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - discuss addition to family; Liam struggles with thought of not being only child
44. Keaghan/Neve - Post AI checkup; all is well
45. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - working on the nursery
46. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - family time; just for Liam; Liam acts out
47. Neve/Selene - morning sickness
48. Neve/Mena - doctor’s appointment; onset of complications
49. Neve/Keaghan - discuss medical issues
50. Neve/Liam - monther/son bonding
51. Neve/Keghan - sonogram; sex of baby determined; medical complications further brought to light
52. Keaghan/Redmon - discuss Keaghan’s fears for Neve and baby
53. Keaghan/Neve - discuss how to move forward with med complications
54. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - discuss what is going on with baby and Neve’s status
55. Neve/Selene/Mena - girls day in
56. Keaghan/Neve - Keaghan finds Neve incapacitated; fear that history really is repeating self
57. Keaghan/Neve/Mena - at hospital; Neve ok
58. Keaghan/Neve - discuss future and how to move forward if something happens
59. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - family time
60. Keaghan/Neve/Liam - new baby born