Category: general, romance Summary: "Did she just say 'maternity leave'?" Season/Sequel: season 9, right after Ripple Effect Spoiler: Ripple Effect (9-13)Rating: K
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OMG WOW!!! I really love that, very shippy and just perfect for a darn good aww factor read which I live for when it comes to these two *gives a HUGE shippy sigh*
Thank you so much for that. Now for watching my DVDs to really keep me in a shippy mood :P
Awww! Jack is so lovely in the way he offers his understanding. This feels true to the characters and I just love the shippiness! I also like the way Sam tried to apprehend her "intruder"!
Favourite line: "She kissed him lightly on the lips. When she looked back at him, she was smiling but he knew better. Locking his gaze on hers, he saw sadness in her eyes, mixed with something else."
Really liked the little addition to the Gateroom scene (When Janet said "Maternity leave" in RE I fell off the chair in shock...and Sam just kinda blinked a bit. I LOVE the idea that the good doctor's words didn't sink in until the gate shut down!)
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Dropping the phone besides her keys, she turned abruptly, ready to hit the intruder, but he was faster than her; he restrained her and pinned her against the wall.
"Is that any way to greet your visitors?"
ROFL, such a Jack thing to say (Not to mention the nice yummy shivers from all the wall pinning activity :D NICE!!!)
Really great little ep addition, liked the open ending (is she pregnant, is she not...great idea to let us make our own minds up!)
Eeee! A dedication! Thank you *hugs* And I wouldn't call it coping, I love your fics and am glad to be of help :-)
I will say again that I love this. Love Sam's shock at the beginning, and her wanting to explain to Jack about Martouf, and the sweetness of the ending... and the subtle marriage reference :-D
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Thank you so much for that. Now for watching my DVDs to really keep me in a shippy mood :P
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Favourite line:
"She kissed him lightly on the lips. When she looked back at him, she was smiling but he knew better. Locking his gaze on hers, he saw sadness in her eyes, mixed with something else."
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I'm glad you liked it.
And this line just popped in my head!
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Well, that's a loaded statement. Hee! Yay for this story. Thanks for writing it :)
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Also;
Dropping the phone besides her keys, she turned abruptly, ready to hit the intruder, but he was faster than her; he restrained her and pinned her against the wall.
"Is that any way to greet your visitors?"
ROFL, such a Jack thing to say (Not to mention the nice yummy shivers from all the wall pinning activity :D NICE!!!)
Really great little ep addition, liked the open ending (is she pregnant, is she not...great idea to let us make our own minds up!)
S/J marriage...SQUEE!
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I'm glad you liked it!
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I will say again that I love this. Love Sam's shock at the beginning, and her wanting to explain to Jack about Martouf, and the sweetness of the ending... and the subtle marriage reference :-D
Am waiting patiently for the next fic ;-)
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I hope I'll have the next fic written soon.
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