fic101: Wrong

[vickysg1]

Title: Wrong
Author: vickysg1
Summary: Her body had been wrong...
Type/Pairings: angst, John/Elizabeth
Main Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard
Rating: G
Beta: csiangel
Prompt Number for fic101: #67 Disappointment
Disclaimer: Not mine, I just borrow the characters for this fic.
Author's note: This is a sequel for Ready or not that ankareeda asked in the timestamp meme I've

Comments

[anuna_81]

That was different, my darling! Definitely more serious than your usual writing, and I mean that as a good thing. I can imagine Elizabeth having this dilemma, and reacting like this. I love how you eased the ending, with a line that brings a smile after their angsty conversation. Right now I just want to squish them and wish them more luck next time!

Thank you for this! Good job! I missed your stories!

[vickysg1]

Thank you so much for this comment, hon. *huggles* When I first wrote Ready or not?, I really didn't know if she was pregnant or not, which is why I left it open, but when Andy asked for a sequel, I decided that no, she wasn't. I wanted to write angst, I guess. And I couldn't help the last line. :P

I've missed writing them too, you know. But what can I say, with the eps they give us in House MD my Muse have chosen her side!

[anuna_81]

I'm hearing only good things about House, so yay! But don't neglect the spark :)

[vickysg1]

You don't watch House? Because you totally should! I'm pretty sure you'd love it!

[vickysg1]

Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked it!

[ankareeda]

THANK YOU, hon. This is amazing, beautifully written. Well done! *shoves them together so they can make a baby* *ggg*

[vickysg1]

Thanks, hon! *huggles*

[wanderingsmith]

very sad, can well see them reacting with that needful clutch at each other..

love the last line :), shows that the sadness will lift, the pheonix rise again soon...

[vickysg1]

Thanks! I love seeing them like this, needing each other.

[bluewillowtree]

This is great. I remember hoping for a sequel, and you've done a beautiful job with both of their reactions. And the ending made me smile.

[vickysg1]

Thank you!