Comments | crazywritinfool: Sweet Charity Fic: Adult: ATS/SPN XO: Ink

crazywritinfool

Sweet Charity Fic: Adult: ATS/SPN XO: Ink

Dec 01, 2007 16:34

Title: Ink
Fandom(s): AtS/SPN XO
Pairing: Dean/Lindsey
Rating: Adult
Words: 9,800
Summary: Sam connives with Lindsey McDonald to renegotiate Dean's contract. Dean is Not Well Pleased.

Notes: Written for meredevachon for Sweet Charity. Beta and pre-writing brainstorm by way2busymom. This story would not be the story it is without her, as anything remotely resembling plot ( Read more... )

spn fic, sweet charity, fic, supernatural

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crazywritinfool December 2 2007, 02:15:46 UTC

So glad you liked it!

*is relieved*

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menomegirl December 2 2007, 07:23:14 UTC

I second all of that. It's what I was thinking but couldn't form the words to say.

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menomegirl December 2 2007, 01:30:03 UTC

I loved the whole thing from beginning to end. Wonderful character voices and thoughts. I love that you kept dynamic between Dead and Sam brotherly and I snickered at the continuing rilvery between Lindsey and Lilah. I liked the quips and the imagery you used.

I've read some Dean/Lindsey fics and this has to be one of the few I've found where the pairing worked for me, from the things they said to each other, to the things they did.

And the sex was damn hot but I liked it all, every sentence.

Excellent fic, sweetie.

Thanks for sharing it!

crazywritinfool December 2 2007, 02:16:58 UTC

Excellent fic, sweetie.

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I don't think I've ever written Lindsey before, now that I come to think of it, and I'm glad he came off well. :-)

menomegirl December 2 2007, 02:28:26 UTC

I didn't think you had but I wasn't sure. And God yes, he came off just perfect. I liked the parts where he briefly angsted over Angel and what happened when he died but it seemed just so much the past to him at that point.

So glad you found your Lindsey-voice because it's a damn good one:more canon-driven than anything else or at least, it felt like it to me and I love it when someone can write something that reads like something I think could have happened.

crazywritinfool December 4 2007, 01:54:18 UTC

I love it when someone can write something that reads like something I think could have happened.

Me, too, and I especially love it when I can make sense of XOs in my head so it seems like they're believable. Always kind of tricky, so again, really glad it worked for you. :-)

technosage December 2 2007, 03:05:02 UTC

First: Hotass. I don't read Dean/male other, almost ever. For more reasons than I can even begin to count and you don't care. But this works, and it's hot, tight, believable. Awesome. Also, tattooed Dean? Grrroww.

Second: Lindsey and Lilah are SO perfect. I love the way you've written both of them here. Lindsey in particular comes through loud and clear, as the guy on the show. Lilah's so slippery, and I think you've done a nice job capturing her.

Third: Oh, Sam. Of course you would make a deal with WRH for your brother. *pets him*

Fourth: Yay! Great fic. I really enjoyed it!

Fith: I have no idea why there are numbers. I just got numerical. So, fifth, Dean is pretty when he's whumped. ;)

crazywritinfool December 4 2007, 01:52:41 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I haven't written any AtS in a while, so it was fun to reacquaint with those characters.

a2zmom December 2 2007, 04:05:53 UTC

First off, great idea. It makes so much sense that Sam would go to the most evil law firm in existence to try to break Dean's contract. Next, wonderful character voices. All of them were done to perfection. Finally, hotness.

And finally, my favorite line - Lindsey's explanation of Connor: "they fucked." BWAH!

crazywritinfool December 4 2007, 01:51:16 UTC

Lindsey's explanation of Connor: "they fucked." BWAH!

Well, they DID... lol.

Glad you liked it! :-) Which reminds me... I don't think I managed to comment on your last fic. I am a horrible person *hides in the corner*

a2zmom December 4 2007, 02:23:17 UTC

Well, you can always go here and ease your conscience, lol.

killerweasel December 2 2007, 04:13:28 UTC

This was fantastic. One of the best crossover fics I've read in ages.

Loved it from start to finish and your Lindsey voice was perfect.

Great job. :D

crazywritinfool December 4 2007, 01:50:24 UTC

This was fantastic. One of the best crossover fics I've read in ages.

Thanks! And thanks for the rec, btw. :-) I appreciate it.

winchestergirl December 9 2007, 08:23:05 UTC

here on a rec from killerweasel... I loved it! all your voices were perfect

*saves to hard drive*

crazywritinfool December 9 2007, 15:04:38 UTC

I loved it! all your voices were perfect

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. :-)