Catching the sunlight, original M/M fic

[crazyamoeba]

Title: Catching the sunlight
Summary: Being a cop is a macho gig, and sometimes you forget that you're more similar to your colleagues than you might think.
Rating: No sex, don't think there's too much swearing. We'll go PG, there is a little swearing.
Genre: Kind of train of thought, introspection, if that doesn't sound too pretentious. It's pretty

Comments

[jaolynn]

I really enjoyed this. Your use of vocabulary and your analogies were great, and really made it come to life. And very interesting to see something from 2nd person point of view, it is very uncommon, and I think you did a good job making it work!

[crazyamoeba]

Thank you very much, I'm really glad you enjoyed this. I'm happy that you think the 2nd person perspective worked out, it's not something I do often at all, and I wondered whether it would work out, particularly with all my messing about with the past and present tense and all that jazz. So thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!