Original fic: Stars

[crazyamoeba]

 

Comments

[cuentagirl]

Wow! That was beautiful and poetic. I like the imagery and structure. Great job! :D

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Correction:

{It lulled my into a sense of security, of thinking that we had forever.} "my" should be "me."

[crazyamoeba]

Thanks ever so much, I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed this. You thought it was poetic? Wow. Just thank you so much.
And thanks for the correction, I've fixed it now. It's amazing that you can still miss something like this after several edits.
Thanks very much for reading and for the lovely review.

[cuentagirl]

You're welcome. Keep writing! *Hugs* :D

[kaori990]

A delicate and vivid introspection, delivered with precise wording.

Superb!

[crazyamoeba]

Wow, thank you so much, that's very high praise indeed, and quite literally everything that I could ever dream to hear about my writing. Thanks ever so for reading and taking the time to review!

[ssquirrel_fic]

This is a really beautiful piece. The star imagery at the beginning is gorgeous, and I loved the quiet sense of tragedy. <3

[crazyamoeba]

Thank you so much, it's really wonderful that you enjoyed the fic. Particularly glad that you liked the star imagery! Thanks very much for taking the time to review, as well.