Comments | crazy_toffee: Naruto fic: "Haven 3/4" (Naruto/Gaara - mild SasuNaru, NC

crazy_toffee

Naruto fic: "Haven 3/4" (Naruto/Gaara - mild SasuNaru, NC - 17)

Jan 04, 2008 11:40

Title: Haven 3/4
Pairing(s): Naruto/Gaara (unresolved SasuNaru in the back)
Warning(s): Angst-a-bundle.
Genre(s): … angst? Introspection?
Rating: NC - 17
Word Length: 22,500 (in total)
Description: Temari wasn’t entirely honest when she sought Naruto’s help. She said Gaara had been missing for a few days, but he’d been missing for a few weeks ( Read more... )

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crazy_toffee January 4 2008, 20:36:00 UTC

YAY!

ash_of_mine January 4 2008, 20:58:43 UTC

Gaara was awesome... *awesome* <3

Gaara frowned, shadows crawled back into his eyes. “Think,” he said, as if it were something distasteful. Gaara shook his head. “You reach stupid conclusions when you think about things.” (... and then Gaara pounces!!lol GO, GAARA!! GO!!)

crazy_toffee January 4 2008, 21:29:22 UTC

(... and then Gaara pounces!!lol GO, GAARA!! GO!!)

Because the only defense is OFFENSE! YAAARRRR!

Thanks!

na_no_nai January 4 2008, 21:00:11 UTC

Damn, I am lovin' this so!

crazy_toffee January 4 2008, 21:28:19 UTC

.... *_* And I'm in love with your icon. WTF, that's just awesome!

na_no_nai January 4 2008, 21:41:57 UTC

in case you wanna see the whole thing >D

crazy_toffee January 4 2008, 21:45:10 UTC

... UNF!

yira_heerai January 4 2008, 23:11:33 UTC

...Just when I think you can't make me flail more, you do. My dog, I think he sensed that there was porn. He wanted to play right in the middle of it D: Aurgh.

*zooms to next part*

night_mare_chan January 5 2008, 00:32:14 UTC

Ditto. Minus the dog part. I don't have anyone to distract me! Ba ha!

Except that icon...Everytime I see it...

crazy_toffee January 5 2008, 15:33:26 UTC

Yes, it IS kind of distracting... O_o

crazy_toffee January 5 2008, 15:07:08 UTC

OH MY GAWD, THAT ICON!? WTF? AHAHAHAHAHAH! Awesome.

Well, maybe your dog DID sense that there was pr0n, and wanted to save your from naughty thoughts. Hohohoho.

jay_tay January 5 2008, 13:50:12 UTC

OMG. THe smut is so hot!

Especially the idea of Gaara being all dressed up and Naruto all vulnerable. I thought maybe Gaara didn't remove any of his clothes is because he wanted Naruto to touch him only when he really meant to want it? Hrmm. Not sure =P

I thought Gaara was very in character. Appearing to be very calm despite the turmoil of emotions deep inside him.

crazy_toffee January 5 2008, 15:09:15 UTC

Especially the idea of Gaara being all dressed up and Naruto all vulnerable.

Yeah... that was fun. Now how I originally planned it, but fun nonetheless. And you're right, Gaara didn't want Naruto to do anything until he was 'mentally resolved' I suppose. Not to get his hopes up.

Thank you!