Naruto fic: "Haven 2/4" (Naruto/Gaara - mild SasuNaru, NC - 17)

[crazy_toffee]

Title: Haven 1/4
Pairing(s): Naruto/Gaara (unresolved SasuNaru in the back)
Warning(s): Angst-a-bundle.
Genre(s): … angst? Introspection?
Rating: NC - 17
Word Length: 22,500 (in total)
Description: Temari wasn’t entirely honest when she sought Naruto’s help. She said Gaara had been missing for a few days, but he’d been missing for a few weeks

Comments

[ash_of_mine]

So angsty...

“I’m not Uchiha Sasuke, and I won’t be him for you either.”
ouch.

(... and i want to shake Naruto out of his emo state... Gaara too... and Sasuke of course, even if he wasn't in this chapter ;p)

[crazy_toffee]

Yeah, this was the "we're all emo and we listen to Linkin Park" chapter. ;P

[yira_heerai]

*recovers from kick*

...That last part is pure and epic win. Hadn't thought about him that way consciously maybe. Ajdafkl

I really wish I could leave more coherent reviews, but this is just what good fic does to me XD;;

[crazy_toffee]

Hadn't thought about him that way consciously maybe.

And ONLY consciously, because subconsciously.... *snort* Yeah. Right.

I'm glad for the perky feedback anyway! :)

[night_mare_chan]

So awesome. So breathtakingly intense. I love the twitches of the sand and when Naruto goes into almost blood lust. God, that's so awesome. Not only that but your writing is smooth and easy to read and I just love everything. Now I want to work on my own stories as well. It saddens me that there is only one more part to this. T.T

[crazy_toffee]

your writing is smooth and easy to read

Eeeeeh! *does the happy dance* Thank you!

You SHOULD work on your stuff too, keep the wheel going, so to speak. :D

Thanks!