Comments | crazy_toffee: Naruto fic: Natural Talent (SasuNaru, NC-17)

crazy_toffee

Naruto fic: Natural Talent (SasuNaru, NC-17)

Mar 23, 2006 22:43

Title: Natural Talent
Gift For: trycicle
Pairing: Naruto/Sasuke
Warning(s): Heavy swearing and ... TALENTLESS smut. Post time-skip.
Genre: blatant smut Comedy? Porn?
Rating: NC-17
Word Length: 2.339
Summary: Naruto and Sasuke try new things, and attempt to be very macho about it… (or should I say childish?)
Author’s comment: This was done for the naruto_rabu fic- ( Read more... )

Comments 96

suzu March 24 2006, 02:35:32 UTC

I love it. XD

crazy_toffee March 24 2006, 02:42:22 UTC

... it loves you back? XD

kitsukikun March 24 2006, 02:37:14 UTC

Yeah, I approve. It had it's hotness. And I like that you make Sasuke a 'lousy lay.' Does he really have to be good at everything. =) It was also awkwardly cute. I liked it, good job.

crazy_toffee March 24 2006, 02:43:35 UTC

It had it's hotness

Well, that's good to know. As far as I was concerned, I wrote one big giggle-fest. I just HAD to make Sasuke a lousy lay, it was MEANT to be. :D The mental image was just too tempting.

lykomancer March 24 2006, 02:47:56 UTC

Oh, Jesus, I just laughed myself sick. You made my night a little bit shinier-- porn and humor, life doesn't get any better. Kudos!

crazy_toffee March 24 2006, 03:04:23 UTC

XD Ahahaahah! Okay, mission accomplished, clearly. (there's two types of porn I love... the funny and the angsty. =_= But funny porn is so rare, isn't it?)

carameltrap March 24 2006, 02:49:32 UTC

Ahaha. Boys having sex is such joygasm to read. Well done. You break up some tension with the right funny moments of them sniping at each other.

crazy_toffee March 24 2006, 03:05:27 UTC

They wouldn't be Sasuke and Naruto if they weren't sniping at each other, would they? ^^U (come to think of it... the ONLY type of first time those two could possibly have, is awkward.)

kunoichi_jaden March 24 2006, 02:54:07 UTC

Hehe, very nice ^_^ *thumbs up!* The awkwardness was a nice change from the usual "we have perfect hot sex on the first try!" fanfics. Awesome, I think I'll be adding this to my memories!

crazy_toffee March 24 2006, 03:07:10 UTC

(woah... your icon is really nice. O_O For a moment there I didn't realise it was both of them and not a repeated image)

Down with instant perfect sex! That doesn't happen, ever! XD These two deserve the messed up hotness and the screwed up attempts at humping each other. ^.~ Thanks for commenting!

kunoichi_jaden March 24 2006, 03:36:36 UTC

You can take the icon if you'd like. No credits needed. ^^ It's just a base that I cut from a scene in episode 101. Its such a nice picture that I couldn't make it into a decorated icon. XP

And it was no problem commenting! I'm gonna browse through your journal now to see what else you've written. You don't mind, do you? ^_^

crazy_toffee March 24 2006, 03:39:10 UTC

Nuuuh... go ahead. There's some stuff in my memories... and the longer Naruto fic I've almost finished is a few posts below this one. ^_^ Free for all.

*licks icon* Pwetty.