Kept, Keep, Keeping

Oct 05, 2009 04:23

Title: Kept, Keep, Keeping
Pairing: Yoosu
Genre: Angst, drama, romance
Length: Oneshot, 5396 words.
Rating: PG-13, some sexual references.
Summary: Junsu dislikes the new guy who just moved in next door. Yoochun finds himself biting off more than he can chew.
A/N: For sleeplesshadow & yoosu_sarang. This took me a fucking 25 days to write. Just shows my level of incompetency ( Read more... )

pairing: yoosu, length: oneshot, fanfiction, genre: drama, genre: romance, genre: angst

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crashingtragedy October 4 2009, 21:08:40 UTC
Spot for my beloved Kim - sleeplesshadow.

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sleeplesshadow October 7 2009, 04:33:31 UTC
Sorry for being MIA for quite a while. I have just settle down after moving my apartment. My new internet connection is a little bit unstable. > < I just don't understand how can moving house and my cousin's wedding happened at the same time. I thought I'm gonna die out of tiredness. XD

But, I'm back. Totally recovered.

This is so awesome. I'm not sure what your initial plan for this, but I love this plot. The coldness and the insecurity in Junsu and how Yoochun trying to invade that so securely self protected Junsu. I really cried when that fucking bastard called Junsu a whore. Who the hell is he.

I could almost feel like glomping Junsu. He sounded so much like a kicked puppy. I love how colorless Junsu's life used to be and how Yoochun wanting to add those colors into his life.

‘Coz I like blue on you. But it’s all right if you can’t make up your mind. I won’t be complaining if you decide to go naked instead.
I wouldn't mind. XD XD

Hope to see you soon and an update!^^

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crashingtragedy October 9 2009, 08:56:17 UTC
great to hear you've settled down and everything! Haha you must have been really busy .... D: get plenty of rest and yoosu love now! (: (:

i'm sooooooooooooo glad to see that you love this. :D your compliments are the best! sometimes i wish that there were more cold!su fics but everyone seems to fancy yoochun to be the colder one instead. so. (:

awww don't cryyyy!!! here's some yoosu-kissing-tissues to wipe your tears away ... *hands you tissues with yoosu kiss face imprinted on it*

xD xD

i bet you would hit me if you knew where the idea of the colors and all came from. *runs* jaechun's new colors pv

believe me, i would never be able to write jaechun, no idea why. beats me too. but i think the idea is cuter on yoosu

THAT LINE WAS FAIL. PARDON ME PLS. but who would mind if junsu went naked right xD xD

hope to see you soon too, love! <3 update yours too! (:

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crashingtragedy October 4 2009, 21:09:06 UTC
Spot for my one and only dongsaeng yoosu_sarang.

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suju_shinki October 4 2009, 22:11:14 UTC
this was so good! Junsu deserves Chun!love!

Junsu could have died under the spell the lustful gaze had over his being. Yes, he whispered incoherently, yes, yes, yes -

-yes, yes, yes indeedXD that's what I would have said if Yoochun started kissing me *dreams*

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crashingtragedy October 5 2009, 06:52:32 UTC
haha that happens to me as well *swoons* we all just love our boys, don't we? xD

thank you for reading this <3

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ingenu3 October 4 2009, 22:18:38 UTC
i wanna spoottt! be back tonight!

=DD

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crashingtragedy October 5 2009, 06:52:49 UTC
all yours, love <3

:D

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ingenu3 October 5 2009, 10:57:06 UTC
This one is for keeping!!!
So so so goood
I like the flow of it :)
it's brillant

especially love how junsu waited for chunnie at his home
I was almost afraid that they wouldn't end up together

love it baby!

:))

thanks for sharing

*glomps

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yoosu_sarang October 4 2009, 22:44:25 UTC
/pounces. rawrr. i'd missed you! i was like /sighs. wondering how my dearest sister is doing ;_;
i totally love this!

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yoosu_sarang October 4 2009, 23:03:35 UTC
okay, im back from re-reading over and over again since i couldn't decides which part made my heart flutters the most and have concluded that i love every word and game they played :D
grahhh zee angst /twirls.
<3<3

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crashingtragedy October 5 2009, 06:55:58 UTC


damn. i missed you too. *hugs* it seems like an eternity back when we had our crazy moments together with our dear godmother xD

and have concluded that i love every word this made my heart flutter so much too. thank you so much <3 i reread it after and the game felt so ... -.- ish. so thank you for giving me renewed faith xD

rarrrrrrr i miss your works too D:

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yoosu_sarang October 5 2009, 07:09:47 UTC
/huggles back. our godmother had long abandoned me. i think i was too bratty. ._. and now i only have you as a family since omma and appa are too busy to care for us.

why yes. i really love this so effing much asdfghjkl; whyy ;_; and what. i reread it after and the game felt so ... -.- ish. is this supposed to mean? /pokes. i love this to bits and i'll bite chu had you think otherwise.

i missed writing too butbut...

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