Comments | cranperryjuice: First-time BDSM gone wrong (GDYB)

cranperryjuice

First-time BDSM gone wrong (GDYB)

Dec 08, 2009 13:12

Title: -
Pairing: G-Dragon/Young Bae
Rating: NC-17
A/N: The prompt was "first-time BDSM gone wrong".

( Ji Yong writhed frustratedly on the bed, pulling against the leather cuffs around his wrists. )

pairing: g-dragon/taeyang, !one-shot, !m/m, artist: big bang

Comments 21

prettyminstrel December 8 2009, 18:47:40 UTC

...

at first i was like, who's Young Beezy? but then i just continued on reading......and at the end i just couldn't figure out what my exact expression are. well its obvious you're not aiming to be humorous (nor fluffy) this time but still, you never fail to got me.

seriously, i think you just stepped on another level in your writing and you should really be proud of that

xomg_dragonluvx December 8 2009, 20:09:11 UTC

I thought the same thing...but since it's by the amazing author that is cranperry, I clicked on the link anyway. XD

<3
I liked LOVED it. ~

cranperryjuice December 12 2009, 05:23:20 UTC

Thank you! And sorry for being confusing. ;o; It's all explained here, if you want to know WTF I was thinking.

cranperryjuice December 12 2009, 05:22:44 UTC

Oh God. XD; I'm going to have to say this a million more times on this page, but I never thought "Young Beezy" would be this confusing. I saw Lyle call him that and thought it was hilarious, and um, I guess I thought most fans had heard about it too. :x

Thank you. :) I have written angsty/awkward stuff like this before, but I'm glad you think this one's a step up. ^^

so_much_kimchi December 8 2009, 19:59:43 UTC

Ha! I saw this at the meme, and it's still brilliant!! It makes me aww a little, that Young-bae tries so hard for Ji-yong and then he ends up messing it all up anyway... It's bound to happen, but I can feel my heart throb a little extra for him anyway~~~

Wonderful little piece of fiction! Yay!

ps, love the hint at Ji-yong not stopping just because Young-bae left... ^^

cranperryjuice December 12 2009, 05:23:55 UTC

Thank you! :)

bobodybob December 8 2009, 20:57:41 UTC

XD I knew it was you when i read this at the meme ^^ Noone else would write it like this. Love it!! But you might want to be scared that I know your writing style that well.... hmm.

cranperryjuice December 12 2009, 05:24:42 UTC

Hmm. I wonder if it's the writing style or just the choice of pairing/subject matter that gives me away. XD Thanks for commenting. <33

butterflyweb December 8 2009, 21:45:30 UTC

Aish, Bae. Jiyong is such a selfish little bitch sometimes.

cranperryjuice December 12 2009, 05:25:02 UTC

That he is. D: Thank you! <3

ijiified December 9 2009, 00:39:31 UTC

Young Beezy? Why do you try to confuse me like this.

It was a cute fic though. I always love how you write YB. <3 This is why he should just be with Perry tho

cranperryjuice December 12 2009, 05:26:13 UTC

It... It wasn't meant to be confusing okay. ;~; There's GDYB right there in the subject line. And Lyle calls him that and I thought it was a lot more widespread dammit

Thanks. :3 <3