slowly
ok, not on the schedule that I'd planned it, but finally got the edits into Chapter 22 of Protectress.
Actually, more of a rewrite - trying to get the sense of internal dialog without having to use to some special font or other way to offset it. not sure if it fits properly. Trying to get inside a minor character's head to enable observation and comment about how someone besides the primary character sees events unfolding.
doesn't help that the head I'm trying to get into is a Pseudo Arachnoid.
Got scenes 220 & 221 from The Lady's Tears migrated into the new directory and formatting issues fixed as well as some editing.
was to the eye doctor today.
effectively blind in my left eye now.
they're setting up an appointment with a specialist to laser it and see if that fixes the problem (or, if the accidently overpowered laser blows the back of my head off).
Actually, more of a rewrite - trying to get the sense of internal dialog without having to use to some special font or other way to offset it. not sure if it fits properly. Trying to get inside a minor character's head to enable observation and comment about how someone besides the primary character sees events unfolding.
doesn't help that the head I'm trying to get into is a Pseudo Arachnoid.
Got scenes 220 & 221 from The Lady's Tears migrated into the new directory and formatting issues fixed as well as some editing.
was to the eye doctor today.
effectively blind in my left eye now.
they're setting up an appointment with a specialist to laser it and see if that fixes the problem (or, if the accidently overpowered laser blows the back of my head off).