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Fic: Taking Chances (1/1)

Feb 08, 2011 07:27

Title: Taking Chances
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through "Journey", but it's pretty AU.
Warnings: Attempted suicide
Summary: Future!Fic. A sequel to Last Call. I hadn't really intended to do one, but the consensus seemed to be that it needed one, so hopefully this passes muster! The song at the beginning is Shakira's "Embrace."

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Comments 32

relvoxballroom February 8 2011, 16:40:04 UTC

You warned me. You did. But I don't have that kind of willpower. So I'm just going to pretend that I didn't read that, and go about my day. To the first part: Yay. To the second ending: massive boo. Too sad.

Must find fluff.

cranberry_pi February 9 2011, 15:09:31 UTC

Yeah, I wasn't sure about that second ending myself - hopefully you found some fluff! :) Thanks for the yay! :D

hostile_666 February 8 2011, 17:41:15 UTC

I couldn't resist reading the spoiler-y thing, I just couldn't, even though I guessed what I was going to read. It was still awsome though :D
And while the first part was adorable and fluffly and awsome, the last bit seemed more realistic. Awsome writing :)

cranberry_pi February 9 2011, 15:10:03 UTC

Thanks so much! :) I'm glad you liked it, and that both endings made sense! :D

miss_icequeen February 8 2011, 18:49:54 UTC

Omg I felt all sorts of emotions going through when reading

I just love this story. Didn't read the other angst ridden part, because it's ben marked black. Thank god!

Not to be rude but are you going to continue this and make it into a series

cranberry_pi February 9 2011, 15:11:54 UTC

I figured I'd give people the option, that way there's a happy ending unless you read further! :) Thanks so much for reading! :D

I'm not sure whether I'll continue or not, honestly - I have a few ideas...we'll see! :D

miss_darkmoon February 8 2011, 19:43:11 UTC

Hahaha, I have no will power!!

This was the most fantastic thing ever. Oh my god. I'm so happy you continued this :D And like, GOD. I could read a whole novel about them trying to get their shit together in New York, because I think it'd be fascinating, but this is a great ending too. Man. The bit with Quinn's mother was great, and just seeing Quinn so messed up is super interesting and awesome in a really morbid way XD I'm a little reminded of Mimi from RENT, because I totally forgot/didn't realize Quinn was an alcoholic, and that threw me. Wow.

I love you so much right now!!! *hug*

miss_darkmoon February 8 2011, 19:44:04 UTC

(Yes I did read the blacked out part. No I'm not acknowledging it XD. And Man, if the inspiration ever strikes you I would freaking love to see this as a series. Like, SO BAD)

cranberry_pi February 9 2011, 15:14:23 UTC

*hugs* Thank you! :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I really like the comparison to Mimi - I hadn't thought of it, but it makes sense! :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and for the hug! :D

Lol - well, that's why it's blacked out, that way you don't need to acknowledge it! :)

mjacton February 8 2011, 20:57:10 UTC

I'm just glad you wrote the sequel. I didn't bother with the alternate ending. The first ending is just right. I know it's irrational to need a happy ending, but I just really do.

Thanks for sharing!

cranberry_pi February 9 2011, 15:15:01 UTC

Nothing wrong with wanting a happy ending, that's why I left it up to the reader! :D Thanks so much for reading! :)