Fic: Identity (6/9)

[cranberry_pi]

Title: Identity
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: Back down to R - nothing quite so unpleasant as last chapter!
Spoilers: Up to and including 1x3 "Acafellas," but it's so AU that it's not likely to spoil anything.
Summary: AU. One morning at McKinley High, a girl who no one knows, who can't remember her own name, appears in the halls. She's short, blonde

Comments

[mjacton]

This update had me a little unsettled for some reason. Quinn was more distant from Rachel, and I kind of don't like that.

But, that doesn't mean it wasn't well-written. It was, and it's all the more reason to look forward to the next chapter.

[cranberry_pi]

That means a lot, that I managed to switch the mood of the piece a bit and still have it be effective - thank you so much! :)

[motylik]

I was kind of hoping that Quinn's sister would be nice and not involved with the whole thing. :( Sad panda. I love your Puck!

[cranberry_pi]

Well, she could still turn out to be nice, right? :)

I'm glad my Puck was likeable! :)

[vsquared_k]

Puck's a good guy. I like that he's a good guy... it doesn't happen enough...

Also, I understand that Quinn's working through stuff on her own, but it kinda makes me feel really bad for Rachel.

And for some reason, I can't help thinking that Rachel snuck out and found the necklace on the side of the road, and Quinn will need it at some point in the future... Oh, the mysticism and such...

[cranberry_pi]

It really doesn't, does it? :)

It's got to be tough for Rachel, no doubt - but Quinn found her way back by the end of the chapter, and they'll work it out together, I'm sure. :)

Hmm - interesting idea! :)

[adikted2muzekls]

I love your story. For their duet I vote for 'For Good' from Wicked. It would be perfect.

[cranberry_pi]

Thank you so much! :) I actually pondered that one, but I decided to do it in another story, so I figured I'd go with something else for this one. :)

[yellowlamb0402]

Aww, Puck's such a sweet guy underneath the hormones and popularity lol <3 I actually liked that Quinn ventured out a little without Rachel I think she's at a point where she's sick of being the victim. I don't think she's pushing Rachel away because she always comes back to her just as openly, but there's definitely development in her attitude towards the memory situation and her new life. It's just written fantastically, I can't wait for the next update :)

[cranberry_pi]

Yep - who knew the hormones were hiding a good guy? :D

I'm so glad it's coming across that way, because that's really how I wanted it to read - thanks so much! :)