Fic: Lucky (6/?)

Mar 04, 2011 07:34

Title: Lucky
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: R for themes.
Spoilers: Up to "Mattress," sort of.  It's AU in that Quinn had a pregnancy scare, but wasn't really pregnant.
Summary: An attempt at this prompt.
WARNINGS: Cancer, Character Death.

Relief. )

fic, faberry

Leave a comment

Comments 9

vsquared_k March 4 2011, 15:35:22 UTC
Russel is... he needs to die in a hole. That was just... no.

Also, Sue? AWESOME. I LOVE HER. <3

And I like the agreement Finn and Rachel came to... It's completely understandable, and I like how Quinn won't have to choose. It's nice, knowing that he understands... The last bit... it made me smile a lot. It made me really happy.

Reply

cranberry_pi March 7 2011, 14:11:01 UTC
He really does, doesn't he?

Lol - yes, Sue is pretty much awesome personified! :D

Well, I do seem to make you cry a lot with my stuff, bb, so I'm glad I can make you happy for a change! :)

Reply


baconrex March 4 2011, 23:33:59 UTC
You made me cry, especially the Sue moment.
Russel is a jackass that needs to get his ass kicked.
I loved Rachel for standing up to him.
The last part made me smile.

Reply

cranberry_pi March 7 2011, 14:12:04 UTC
Is it weird to say I'm glad I made you cry? I'm glad the story was affecting, how's that? :)

He definitely does - and Rachel standing up to him was my favourite part to write!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D

Reply


gingervitality March 6 2011, 11:12:21 UTC
Oh Cranberry_Pi. ;( This is so well-written, it hurts.

Can I be a character in this story and kill Russell?! Hahaha, kidding!

Oh how I love Sue in this. And Santana too. And Finn!!!
AND RACHEL HAS ALWAYS LOVED QUINN!!!

Quinn's list is really interesting. Thank you for this! Can't wait for the next update!

Reply

cranberry_pi March 7 2011, 14:13:32 UTC
Thank you! *hugs*

Lol - I'll see what I can do? :)

Well, of course she has - how could anyone not love Quinn? :D

Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reply

gingervitality March 8 2011, 10:04:51 UTC
OMG. CRANBERRY_PI! *hugs back*

HAHAHA. I was just kidding with the killing part, but I really hate Russell. Like... really hate him.

"...how could anyone not love Quinn?" - Totally agree. ;)

Off to read your new updates!!! :D

Reply


hostile_666 March 8 2011, 00:00:37 UTC
I was literally just sitting here with my jaw clenched reading that bit with Russell, I actually want him to die in a fire. Wanker. That being said, you capture his character really well. I nearly cried with the Sue bit, I loved it. I also love that Finn was mature enough to do what was best for Quinn and not make her choose. I like your Finn. I don't like who he has become these days. Anyway, awesome writing :D

Reply

cranberry_pi March 8 2011, 14:20:23 UTC
Sometimes I worry that I go overboard when I write Russell's lines - but then I think about my own relatives and he sounds about right to me, so I'm glad I capture him well!

I know just what you mean about Finn - it'd be a lot easier to watch him on the show if they hadn't turned him into such a caricature, I think. But nobody's offered me a writing job there yet, lol.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting - I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up