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Fic: Lucky (4/?)

Feb 28, 2011 12:27

Title: Lucky
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: NC-17 for graphic sex.
Spoilers: Up to "Mattress," sort of. It's AU in that Quinn had a pregnancy scare, but wasn't really pregnant.
Summary: An attempt at this prompt.
WARNINGS: Cancer, Character Death.
CHAPTER WARNING: Explicit het sex.

A/N: I know, I know - the tag says Faberry, so what's with the Quinn/Finn ( Read more... )

fic, faberry

Comments 10

frensayce March 1 2011, 01:14:09 UTC

Ah! Actually just felt my eyes bug out while reading that last line.
You wrote this love scene really well. It worked beautifully with the characters, not even counting the twist you gave it at the end. :)

cranberry_pi March 1 2011, 14:27:50 UTC

Mission accomplished, then! :D

Thank you so much - I was a bit hesitant writing it, as I don't have much experience writing that sort of scene, but I'm really glad that it worked well! *relieved sigh*

vsquared_k March 1 2011, 03:11:42 UTC

OH WAIT WHAT WOAH

Also, that was beautiful. That Quinn powered through everything and tried something new... that was remarkable. I feel for her, and I'm glad Brittany stopped San from hurting Rachel :P

Nice twist at the end. Remarkableeee <3

cranberry_pi March 1 2011, 14:29:35 UTC

IKNOWRITE? :D

Thank you, BB - and yes, thankfully Britt prevented the epic smackdown that would have happened otherwise! :)

Aww, thanks! :)

thatissodawn March 1 2011, 18:06:18 UTC

Sigh. It's hard not to like Finn in this fic. He's so good to her.

I am excited for the follow up! Gotta prepare my heart.

cranberry_pi March 4 2011, 14:14:02 UTC

I don't write likable!Finn often, because, well, I don't much like him, lol! But it's kind of fun to write a change!

Thanks so much! :D

baconrex March 2 2011, 03:46:31 UTC

I liked this chapter. You Finn is sorta likeable. Cannot wait to read the next part.

cranberry_pi March 4 2011, 14:14:26 UTC

I know, it's weird! :D Thanks for reading! :)

hostile_666 March 2 2011, 08:04:00 UTC

I actually read the sex bits, which was way weird, but I like that they were good to each and that last line I was just sitting there like, 'huh?' I'm metaphorically running to the next chapter :D

cranberry_pi March 4 2011, 14:15:04 UTC

Well, don't metaphorically wind yourself with all that running, lol. :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reading! :)