[fic] J/Inoran - Luna Sea - Past the Breakers

[yokozuki]

Title: Past the Breakers
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Shockingly little swearing, some offscreen drug use and whatnot.
Notes: Each section was written in a separate timed challenge for last_pleasure - 30 min, 60 min, 10 min respectively. Mimei said she wanted AAAAAANGST!! and bandfic, and threw a song at me - Understanding in a Car Crash, by Thursday. The

Comments

[mimei]

i love this a lot.

a lot, a lot.

yes.

[yokozuki]

Maybe I should try to do Inoran's side sometime. *considers, tipping head*
For some reason it's easy to think of oneself as being in J's head. Inoran's harder.
I'm glad it worked in some way. XD ♥

[mimei]

Inoran's a lot harder to write than J, I find.
I think J's personality it just easier to read somehow.
And Ino's B. *happily blames bloodtypes*
But...I think it's beautiful like this, although I certainly wouldn't be adverse to another part!

[mimei]

*is just

[yokozuki]

Mmmmm. XD YAY. I am glad you like! ^___^ ♥ And, well, I was kind of... getting smashed at the beginning and reasonably smashedish by the end... so that probably added a touch of authenticity to the language... *dies* Anyway. ♥!!

[watermeloned]

Wow, it's something like David Lynch. At least the images that popped into my head were.

[yokozuki]

XD Maybe I should go watch something of his sometime and see?
Thank you for the comment! *glomps*

[seungjea]

been a while since i saw this pairing ...
thanks for giving me reminiscence of luna sea ^^

[yokozuki]

XD Pretty much, huh? There's jxinoran but it's pretty low-traffic...
Luna Sea are love. ^_^ If you feel like some LS fic, there's arna_ki's archive if you didn't already have it, and bluetent has some lovely stuff, and I've got two other little J/Ino ones and then LS showed up in an X fic and Sugi popped his head into a Dir fic of mine...

[yokozuki]

And, zomg, thank you for reading and commenting! >_< XD

[sugarless_666]

*dies a bit right at the beginning* xDDD

It's surreal to stand here and shiver beneath a palm tree wearing a wifebeater and Ryuichi's jacket and half of Sugizo's lipstick. Ryuichi had watched the beautiful, on-fire Sugi like a resentful hawk while pretending to hardly know his name; Sugizo had watched J - and if he meant to be unobserved then he was far less sneaky than he ever dreamed himself.

Ohhh, this part was so pretty, in a strange way... Cool. ♥

& also Crashing onward, blind. All of them, blind. Broken.

I like the tension right at the start, and how it keeps building and building through the whole thing, until it all comes crashing down. The whole thing seemed way longer than it actually was.

Well, you know I don't know much about these guys (apart from their music), but I liked this a lot. ♥

[yokozuki]

Thank you for reading it and stuff! *happy dance* *kisses* Hm... ah, more and more? xD;; If you have time and inclination, if you don't, no worries. And really. *kisses* It was a very emo day. XD