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Training Part 2

Nov 25, 2006 05:00

Title: Training: Part 2

Author: CrabbyLioness
Characters: Torchwood 5
Disclaimer: Property of the BBC & their people. I'm not making a penny.
Rating: PG No porn yet, folks.
Word Count: 1100-ish?
Spoilers through Countrycide

Sequel to Damages
Part 1

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fic, training

Comments 34

firiel44 November 26 2006, 04:35:04 UTC

Yes. I love this. All the voices are perfect, both of them energized by having a long-term project to work on, Ianto with the Latin. Nice save for Jack with the Welsh. And someone recognizes that Ianto isn't the frail little pet they make him appear to be with the carefully positioned perspective and the weepiness! *hearts you* Excellent character analysis (quite possibly better than certain writers have done.)

Can't wait to see what's next! Take care of the arm.

crabby_lioness November 26 2006, 04:46:32 UTC

Thank you!

*grumble, grumble* "Frail little pet"? He's a giant! He's one of those really tall guys who overcompensates by trying to blend into the woodwork. AND he has to be a logistical genius to stash Lisa the way he did, as well as uber-loyal. Come read my earlier Torchwood fic. I love writing about Ianto.

firiel44 November 26 2006, 05:42:21 UTC

Absolutely! But they carefully never let him stand right next to Jack so you can see that. Send him off with Tosh - anyone looks big next to her. At least they finally let him show off a little bit of brains in "Countrycide". ♥ ♥ ♥ Ianto

Ooh, more fic! Now I'll never stop reading in time to write my own.

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crabby_lioness December 11 2006, 16:53:37 UTC

Thank you! Stick around and read the rest of my Jack/Ianto!fic.

adafrog November 26 2006, 05:33:15 UTC

This was great. A refreshing look at the boys.

crabby_lioness December 11 2006, 16:54:32 UTC

Thank you!

koshi700 November 26 2006, 05:46:35 UTC

YAY! chapter 2! this was good, can't wait for the rest. :)

crabby_lioness December 11 2006, 16:54:51 UTC

Thank you!

teaphile November 26 2006, 08:17:55 UTC

I am thoroughly enjoying this. I especially appreciate how you're letting Ianto grieve for Lisa.

crabby_lioness November 26 2006, 13:53:24 UTC

I empathize strongly with Ianto because I've been in his shoes as the primary caregiver to a totally disabled loved one who the hospital wanted to terminate instead of giving a chance, and who then died. I found Cyberwoman compelling and completely believable, but judging from the reactions of others it may be a "you had to be there" scenario.