Fiction: A Change on the Wind

[crabby_lioness]

Title: A Change on the Wind 
Author: CrabbyLioness
Main Characters: Merlin, Arthur, Uther 
Summary:  immediately after The Poisoned Chalice.
Disclaimer: If I owned them, they'd have different plot holes. 
Rating: PG
Word Count:  769
Spoilers:  I've only seen through Episode 4.

Comments

[mcicioni]

I enjoyed this, for its indefinite, still indetermined atmosphere (and Merlin's sense of humour). Hope you will keep watching and writing.

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you. What's definite about teenagers, other than their definite ability to be pains in the ass? Figuring out what you are and are not definite about is what adolescence is for. And there's the larger issue of generational change in the background, so there's an awful lot of ambiguity swirling about. I tried to capture that mood.

[lupus_malus]

Great to see you in this fandom. There seem to be a lot of Torchwood people here! Your icon is very recognisable and is one I've come to associate with good fic and insightful meta over in the Torchwood comms. I hope you'll write more for Merlin. Nice fic, by the way!

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you!

My husband and I are silversmiths. The Inlaid Goddess is a pendant we made. http://brigidsforge.com/necklaces.php

I've got a review of the first three episodes up, and I'm working on one for the fourth.

[entropynchaos]

Yay! You're writing Merlin fic now! ^_^

Just wait - there's more great (and quite slashy!) episodes to come.

This is great - you really seem to have the characters' voices down. Lovely fic!

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you. People tell me I'm good with voices.

[cruaich]

Wow, that was really good. I often find shorter pieces don't interest me all that much, but this really covered a lot, and did it very well. :)

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you. I find shorter pieces work best when they're either gags or mood pieces.

[archaeologist_d]

Merlin certainly got his own back! LOL. Good job.

[crabby_lioness]

You know he'd do it, too! Thanks.