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[crabby_lioness]

Character study of Ianto, unbetaed so the mistakes are all my fault

Jack/Ianto, humor, angst, bossyIanto

Completed 6 hours before Cyberwoman aired.

Rating: PG with implied sex (I can't write sex scenes. Sorry.)

Word count: lots

Disclaimer: These guys belong to much better writers. I'm just practicing.

Comments

[altorogue]

That was LOVELY. I very much enjoy your characterization of Ianto, adds some flesh to him. Very human and real.

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you! Ianto has to have some sass under that quiet exterior. You see it peeking out in 'Day One'.

[mneiai]

"You stabbed me in the back not too long ago."

"Yes I did. For my lover."

Jack stared at him a long moment, then grinned.

Loved that Ianto line, I think I had the same reaction to it as Jack--stopped a moment, then cracked up. I really dig you Ianto and I like the way you wrote this, where you took everthing.

[crabby_lioness]

LOL "That's not a flaw, that's a feature!"

Ianto would do great in sales.

[ria_kukalaka]

Awww this is great. I like the slow build up to their relationship and the ending is perfect. *g*

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you. It has to be a slow build up. Wouldn't work if it was rushed.

[adafrog]

I adored this. Love them deciding the rest of the team can figure it out for themselves. Thanks.

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you. Ianto has a generalist's opinion of specialists.

[pinkamethyst]

This? Was brilliant. I mean, really, really brilliant. :D I love Jack/Ianto (two hot guys together -- who wouldn't?) and you managed to write them just perfectly. I love that you've merged the humour and flirtyness with the darker aspects: Lisa's death, Jack's immortality.

[crabby_lioness]

Thank you. If I hadn't thrown in the dark along with the light, they'd just be dolls, wouldn't they? Dolls who happen to have the same name.