Fic: The Next Day

[cowboyguy]

Title: The Next Day
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: G
Summary: "This second trial hit you a lot harder than the first one. I don't know whether it was just more intense or what." -- "Felt the same. Till the next day."

Comments

[tarotgal]

Awwwww Sammy!

I love your descriptions, like the moonlit forest and the sound of Sam breathing and the sun through the windshield.

And I really love the sense of uneasiness when it should be a great feeling of accomplishment. I love that Dean doesn't push or smother, just does as much as he can to get Sam safe and get him home, though he knows that won't fix it. Aw, Dean, you're the best big brother.

[cowboyguy]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it!

There are so many magical time jumps in Supernatural, and I really enjoyed just getting into one of those and going, "Okay, what happens? How are they dealing with this?" Glad the uneasiness came through, because at first I was worried the fic would be too quiet -- I mean, it's basically driving and sleeping. So I'm glad I was able to capture those emotions even where there wasn't a lot of action happening, plot-wise.

Thanks!

[trepkos]

Oh - very worrying. Is there more?

[cowboyguy]

There... could be?

It ended up being shorter than it may have been because I was trying to finish it before the end of September for my "write and post one fic per month" goal. Posted with fifteen minutes to spare!

But there was more in my head that didn't make it onto the page. So there could be a sequel... Hmmm... :)

Thanks for reading!