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[courtneynus]

Title: Gravity of Love
Author: Courtneynus
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing: Riku/Sora
Spoilers: All of Kingdom Heart II and Kingdom Hearts I, some of Kingdom Heart Chain of Memories

Comments

[reppu]

You did a great job of telling the story of Kingdom Hearts. As a long-time fan, I was able to put the pieces together myself, but it's always difficult to explain the concept of their love to others. Thank you for making it so simple and easy to understand.

[moffit]

I do like that you put this together, but I think some of your examples are flawed, as you are also using Replica Riku, who is an entirely different person.

[siriusxremus]

I think much like moffit that on a whole its great you put it together but a lot of it made me blink once or twice. Wording seemed odd, but this also could be because I just recently woke up. A lot of emphasis on idolism less on the boys being deep childhood friends, and Riku being popular, Replica Riku who is just a false Riku and not the real thing, while he is important remember the Real Riku isn't going to know about him and Sora forgot completely about him. You also state that it remains to be unseen what the light was that opened the door in the darkness, but considering the name of the game and where Riku pointed its pretty obvious that its his emotions, his feelings, his love, his heart

[courtneynus]

Over viewing makes the paint scratches in my horrid writing style makes it look a decent piece of literature, no? Thank you, I tried to do the pairing justice, to not make the fans hide in shame. For KH1 even I didn't ship there, way to young, het there, making my slasher skin burn. Thank you, once again and not head-desking at the whole thing ^^

[courtneynus]

Oh, damn, the whole thing is a bit to follow or just the Sum up? Tis' a shame for graphical talent to be such a bitch but writing well I suck at that too XD

[courtneynus]

I . . .:censorned: I hated that part, my beta had to beat me with a e-mail backlash to change the wording to that. :Ego boast: I knew I shouldn't have changed it. Speaking of icons I need to get started again, next weekend, tried of effing writing but I just got a HET couple! Ouran Host club roxs my socks. But I hoped you enjoyed my long ass, horrible ship rant, your opinion is one of the few I care about :emo tear:

[scribblefish]

I love your passion and solid grounding for most if not all of your facts. However, I do agree that the wording is a little too dramatic. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this.

I adore the headers for each section, especially the Secondary Hero and Anti-Hero ones.

[courtneynus]

Thank you! Sorry if the wording makes me sound like a belonged in a french musical or famous play, I had to sub words I used way too much.

Thank you, I made them myself -- I'm better at graphic than writing, too bad this can't be a picture book -.-;;