Karaoke Fun
Title: Karaoke Fun
Pair: Taguchi/Nakamaru
Genre: Smut and some romance and humor I guess.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: They were supposed to be working on their duet song, but of course Taguchi had something else on his mind.
Note: Lyrics taken from yarukizero @ LJ!
( I gotta lock on girl... )
I HAVE OFFICIALLY DECLARED THAT I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO WATCH THE KT SHUFFLE VIDEO WITHOUT THINKING OF THIS. LIKE I HAD TO GO BACK AND LOOK AT THE VIDEO BECAUSE I KEPT THINKING 'UWAAA WHAT IF HE WAS AND THEY HAD TO CUT IT OUT BECAUSE THERE IS JUST NO WAY TAGUCHI CAN BE THAT SUBTLE OH NO OH NOOOO" AND I'M A TOTAL MESS RIGHT NOW *SOB*
Ok but like I've been looking forward to this fic so much and I am so ecstatic that you finished it and notified me because it's like you know exactly what sort of Tagumaru I need in my life.
Plus ok let me just talk about this for a second.
The song mentions. Ok even though they were interspersed in with the actual moment and the songs seem sort of arbitrary, the lyrics to their songs are so often full of love and understanding that it really reflected on their dynamic here. Also I never mentioned before but it thrilled me that they chose songs from their CHAIN album to sing because that is my favourite album by them. Plus the song ONE DAY is a song that always makes me think of the freshness and laughter that comes with Tagumaru <3
What I especially love about the way you write them is how you convey them as established in a way. They just kind of fall together and it's always new because Taguchi excites Nakamaru in new ways
like
Nakamaru knew at that point; he knew that Taguchi was just trying to tease him.
It was what he did, after all
AHHHH yeah he does :'D BUT HELLO to Nakamaru liking the adrenaline of panic hahaha I see you, man.
But ok the fact that there is also a great deal of communication without words going on there too. Junno tugging on his arm and Nakamaru responding is so. it's just so fucking sweet. Excuse me I've been hormonal all morning and it's making me weep over your smut hahaha
This part really got me though
There was, however, one thought that came into his mind.
He looked beautiful.
The thought surprised him, but he couldn't focus on it. The look on Taguchi's face, contorted with pleasure, was causing pure adrenaline and ecstasy to course through him.
NAKAMARU BEING SURPRISED BY HOW BEAUTIFUL JUNNO LOOKS TO HIM AND GOD I JUST LOVE MOMENTS LIKE THAT. THE WAY HE LOOKS AT HIM IN THAT MOMENT, KNOWING ITS JUNNO THAT'S GOT HIM SO WORKED UP AND NOT ANYTHING ELSE. YO, THAT'S SO ROMANTIC AND I COULD WRITE SONNETS ABOUT IT, GAWD.
Nakamaru-san...what's that on your shirt?”
I MAY HAVE GONE INCOHERENT AT THIS PART. OMG NO~~ HAAHAHAHA brilliant.
you are excellence as usual and you made an already fantastic morning all the better with your words. thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with me <33
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