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[theupshot]

In the dirty bar,
At midnight, we forgo Pabst.
Coke drifts like new snow.

These so-called haiku are strangely bemusing, probably due to their lack of essence.

Comments

[screwragnarok]

. . .

[theupshot]

Like I said: lack of essence.

[screwragnarok]

You are acquainted with the art form.

[theupshot]

Marginally.

[screwragnarok]

Write your own, if you think you can do better.

[theupshot]

I have.

[screwragnarok]

I would like a copy.

[theupshot]

If you wish.

[screwragnarok]

Have it on my desk tomorrow.

[theupshot]

Pick it up yourself if you're so interested.

I am not your student.

[screwragnarok]

Fine.