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Mar 11, 2009 23:06

Her face had the fragrance of a gibbous moon. The scent of fresh snow. Her eyes were dark birds in fresh snow. They were the birds' shadows, they were mirrors; they were the legends on old charts. They were antique armor and the tears of dragons. Her brows were a raptor's sharp, anxious wings. They were a pair of scythes. Her ears were a ( Read more... )

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emosniper March 12 2009, 04:21:38 UTC
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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:26:44 UTC
Yes~?

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emosniper March 12 2009, 04:28:25 UTC
That's terrible.

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:41:11 UTC
Hahaha~ Are you sure~

Her legs were quills. They were bundles of wicker, they were candelabra; the muscles were summer lightning, that flickered like a passing thought; they were captured eels or a cable on a windlass.

What about that~

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vlangevin March 12 2009, 04:23:36 UTC
That is rather elaborate, isn't it?

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:28:46 UTC
It is~ But isn't that what makes it more wonderful~

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vlangevin March 12 2009, 04:30:00 UTC
It doesn't really make sense though, does it?

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:42:01 UTC
Hahaha~ No, it doesn't~ But I find that... charming~

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lectorisalutem March 12 2009, 04:24:49 UTC
If you aren't making a very poor joke, you and I need to have a chat.

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:31:48 UTC
Hahaha~ What would we need to chat about~ Hmm, how about how...

Her pubes was a field of wheat after the harvest, a field neatly furrowed; it was a nest, a pomegranate, an arrowhead, a rune.

How did you think that's possible~

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lectorisalutem March 12 2009, 04:37:27 UTC
Her pubes were...

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:43:03 UTC
Oh, I know that, but it's a shame that the editor didn't~

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absentesimal March 12 2009, 04:25:15 UTC
. . .

i don't get it.

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:34:21 UTC
What don't you get~ How her face smells like a gibbous moon or fresh snow~ Or how her tongue is amber and a ferret~?

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absentesimal March 12 2009, 04:37:57 UTC
yeah. i don't get any of that.

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:45:01 UTC
That's because it really doesn't make that much sense~ But that's what I like about it~

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futuresnack March 12 2009, 04:25:24 UTC
I think I might have just gone blind from reading that, dear.

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:35:25 UTC
Aww~ But it's published work, though~

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futuresnack March 12 2009, 04:43:47 UTC
Whoever published that pathetic excuse for writing should have been shot on sight.

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ephemeralember March 12 2009, 04:45:46 UTC
Hahaha~ You really feel that strongly against it~ It's just text~

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