Twenty One.

[countingcr0ws]

Title: Twenty One
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AU, Relatively Happy, Romance, School Life, Slice of Life
Summary: Hyunjoong suffers from unrequited love.
Inspired by: Prompt

Comments

[fruitline]

And I spot!

[countingcr0ws]

lol! i pre dated it, like to bury it within the depths of my journal (but you're here!). haha. and i didn't cross post it elsewhere. okay, i suppose i did, since i replied the prompt in the anon meme previously. but yeah. i'm kinda clearing and tidying up loose ends rn. :/
i didn't expect any one to even notice that i actually created a post. :) *soft sniff of gratefulness?* haha.

[fruitline]

sorry dear life's crazy busy these past few days and will be busy for another 2 weeks. this story is so bittersweet. i can almost imagine myself as HJ longing after Jae, and the final realization that YH is perfect for Jae is probably going to kill me. This was well written despite not being in your usual and I enjoyed it, rooting for Yunjae but still having an ounce of sympathy for HJ.

[countingcr0ws]

my usual? *sits up raptly* you know i honestly think that you're legit. lol. like your whole observation about my yhs being perfect and my jjs being odd.
how is it not my usual? haha. because i honestly thought that it sounded like me. like my usual writing voice. and when i wrote it, i was a bit bummed, because i felt like i was exploiting the whole first person narrative thing like just because i can kind of thing.

why are you busy? :D school holiday? (it is over here!) hahaha. if i'm right, then HHAHHAHA. lord have mercy on you. but it's kinda rewarding too, like the whole kids thing.
and your compliments are hitting me in the right spot! i'm flailing in happiness. hahha. but really. i'm glad that i managed to make you feel for khj while rooting for the main pairing. but i bet there's still work to be done, if i ever dared to reread it again. mannn.

[hujanbiru]

I love this^^

[countingcr0ws]

*shy smile* haha. i suppose i really needed that. thank you. i'll work harder :D

[ext_2049254]

This is really good. You know, I'm tired of Yunjae, especially since most author always potrayed Jae as the one pinning and begging for Yunho love (ugh..!!). I always looking for unusual pairing of Jae, especially with some one outside of DBSK. Hyunjoong and Seunghyun (TOP) are my favorite. I hope you'll write something about this. If you make a sequel for this story, it'll be awsome if Yunho change and fuck up their relationship and Jae left him to be with HJ. It'll be awsome....!! Not to many author dare to walk on the wild side so I almost never find any (yaoi) story of Jae with OC.

[ligerliger]

YOU POSTED IT I'M SCREAMING AND OH MY GOD SO MANY THINGS I MUST FAVORITE JUSHFUIHSUIGHHBDSGIUFBV

[countingcr0ws]

sheeeeeetzzzzzzz, you flatterer. is it shameless, but i reread (and edited it bc mistakes are endlesssss, omggg) it, and i'm kinda proud of it too. like it's probably my best work or smth. looool. *runs off to hide* hahahaa.
and i don't even have enough ovaries to give you anymore. D;
heehee.

[ligerliger]

IT REALLY IS SO GOOD, YOU SHOULD BE PROUD D: I made another friend read it lol
/petpet/ just one is enough~ ♥

[countingcr0ws]

*covers face in embarrassment*
god, i'm so shy.

[kattan69]

Poor guy...he missed his chance...if there was one.

[countingcr0ws]

OH MAN, I LOVED THIS THE BEST, DUDEEEEEE. HOW CAN YOU BE SO CHILL, OMG. I WAS KINDA AMAZED, TBH?? AND I SEROUSLY HAD THAT BOTTLE LIKE THEN THOUSAND YEARS AGO AND I WAS SO PROUD OF MYSELF FOR IT WHEN I REREAD THIS??????? DUDEEEEEE. /SHAKES YOU SO HARD.

oh man. /tiny voice. am i shameless?