Press '1' For The Love of Your Life

Jun 17, 2015 12:29

Title: Press '1' For The Love of Your Life
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Fluff, Happy, Romance
Warning: Eight years age difference, nothing explicit though; Drunk people do not act this way, I think
Summary: Prompt- Accidentally called your number while drunk asking for a ride and you actually came au ( Read more... )

jaejoong puked, yoochun!friends with jaejoong, dbsk inception, drunk!jaejoong, yunho!gentleman, jaejoong!university student, nudity, jaejoong!virgin, accidental nudity, jaejoong watches porn/watched porn, yoochun!half present, yunho!lawyer, bad writing, voyeurism accidental, jaejoong!innocent, no sex as usual, jaejoong slept naked very very smexy, situational humiliation

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harunotenshi June 17 2015, 11:38:52 UTC
this was the cutest oneshot i've read today. well... to be honest, it's the only oneshot i've read today and it's just so adorable and cute and fluffy ( ... )

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countingcr0ws June 18 2015, 00:47:57 UTC
your last line, where you know where it'd be going without is A+. they'll be setting off to the sunset of love, lol. lemme copy my previous ramble to titieyara, looooool. quote:

they're made for each other anyway so they can just drop the whole courting ritual thing and become husbands but noooo yh will not drop that important process and they'll go on smexy (i like the word) dates, meet yoochun, jj will bring lunch to yh's workplace and they'll finally get together instead of just dating and yh will go for jj's graduation ceremony, yh will organize a sleepover without sex, they'll go to the amusement park, visit each other's parents, and then yh will stick his peepee into jj's butt for the first time and jj will be all shy because he's never played with his butt before, they'll go to the gym together and yh will ?????? over jj's interest to beef his biceps up (it's due to yh in the first place), jj will be a sex monster now, yh will be grilled by jj's siblings, attend a wedding of XX together and they'll go on a double date with ( ... )

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harunotenshi June 18 2015, 05:39:23 UTC
ㅋㅋㅋㅋ i couldn't help but laugh at your pasted ramble up there~XDDDDD it's just so cute because half of what you said in your ramble was exactly what i pictured yunjae's future would be in this fic~XDDDDDD though, junsu did suddenly ninja this way into yoochun's life, but really, details aren't important because they're all happy and in love and live together~XDDDDD

it is darn smexy and cute and fluffy and just adorable on many different levels~ idk~ it's just what i feel about this oneshot.

idk about me getting a whole lot out of this oneshot than you though... maybe because you wrote this and i'm a reader and well, to you maybe, this could've had more going on or like you said, more character development... but for me, it's great (and cute and fluffy) as it is :)

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countingcr0ws June 18 2015, 06:13:58 UTC
ikr, it's like literally, we know how every single fluff will go. like they'll be in fluffy sweaters, laugh at each other, do the things they like, they'll be nervous and shy and all. oh my god. this is all a delusion, you can't ever find cute in rl. D: omg, i can't believe i just said it. YOU CAN'T EVER FIND CUTE IN REAL LIFEEEEEEEEEEEEEE /TEARS HAIR OFF. well, anyway, i'm having like an aneurysm right now because cocker spaniels have like 5-8 puppies at once whereas poodles only have mostly 1 each time and i don't want 5-8 puppies because i just don't want that (wow, rude. but really. they'll probably have to give the puppies away if it's so many and i don't want that, i'm a hoarder) but hiro's a boy. this is hard. why does dbsk have to have dogs when they can't have dogs bc their schedules??? okay, wow, rude (but seriously. look at taepoong...). but yeah, i'm filling a prompt where like their dogs breed each other (no taepoong!!!!!!! nooooo, i want a cockapoo) and stuff and ngl, the research is scary. why would jj/yh not neuter ( ... )

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harunotenshi June 18 2015, 07:20:48 UTC
ㅋㅋㅋㅋ you have a lot of stuff going on in that mind of yours. :) it's kind of like your own version of an organized chaos ( ... )

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countingcr0ws June 18 2015, 07:39:16 UTC
dude, that's damn lot of puppies. and i feel you on the pushing too hard for a fic thing. but that aside, why didn't you neuter your dog, because oh my god, that's a lot of puppies. :OOO but then again, purebreeds sell well, whoops. and i have absolutely no contact with dogs but i've hung on some forum and dude, people are harsh when other people's dogs get pregnant and they have no knowledge at all. which you do, but still, and yeah, i mean dbsk would have to neuter their pets because i would totally do alimony if my pet got knocked up by theirs and find all sorts of reasons to insist that my dog/ cat was in love with theirs just to have playdates while i stare at them, idk, but don't you think so? i have a feeling that i'll probably be shelving this whole puppy fic. :/

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harunotenshi June 18 2015, 07:59:47 UTC
i've survived... for the most part... ^^ i have no puppies to take care of right now so i'm good. the sad part is, i do want to have my dog neutered but it costs a lot...

pure breeds do cost a lot, i know. correction though on my dogs, i do have 3, but only 1 is a pure breed black labrador while the other 2 are a mixed breed of labrador and german sheperd. 2 of my dogs are male and the other female. so you can just imagine the noise when the female goes into heat. :3 but they're all awesome guard dogs, especially my male mixed breed one. :D he looks like a big golden retriever, only he's pure black :D

dog pregnancies -- i had to learn about it the actual way. :D it's ok for the most part, just not the ungodly hour they give birth and the long hours of waiting until all the puppies are out.

LOL play dates? gosh, i don't even allow my dogs to socialize with other dogs because they're big. LOL most of the dogs in my neighborhood are small. hmmm... you puppy fic may or may not be shelved... that entirely depends on you though :)

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