Scattered Vertebrae (II)

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Title: Scattered Vertebrae
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot, Sequel ( 1 | 2 )
Genre: AU, Generally Happy, Lucid, Slice of Life
Summary: Jaejoong finds himself walking on a thin line, wondering if having nothing, or nothing, is better.

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OHKAY. So I was about to shut off my lappie and then I see SCATTERED VERTEBRAE. TWO. Zomg girl you'll be the death of my limited sleep. I need to run around and scream and spazz before I calm down and start reading. I am so so so so so so sooooooo glad you wrote Jae's perspective about this relationship. :') I think I owe you a decent comment after going back to being a ghost reader for a while. Guilty as charged.

MY FEELS. No, really. My heart is pounding just reading Jae riding an elevator. The anticipation I can't-

The cologne had been the most subtle form of possessiveness he had ingeniously calculated to engineer right under Yunho's nose. So much green-eyed beauty in this line. I am never going to look at perfume the same way again. Ugh you make me want to throw mine out. Siriusly girl, are you trying to kill me? I'm not even a quarter through the text and I think I'm gonna cry. Am I scary you? Nah I think you've seen me scarier hahaha. Okay now I'm scaring myself. =.=

ZOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMG. Why don't I remember Yun being topless? And omg that thousandandone meanings behind a bottle of maple syrup. I feel so dumb for not having caught it the first time round.

Ohgaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawd. This is beautiful. I love Jaejoong's characterisation in this. Just like how I loved Yunho's in part 1 lol. This is just.... I dunno, I feel it completes the whole story.And I want to hold their two heads together and crash them really hard together that it hurt so they know what big idiots they are. It's just.... the symmetry in both parts and yet how different people Yunjae are it's just... I'm sorry I'm bad with words. They are like two aching souls just reaching for each other, like each a strand of DNA coiling around each other to form the double helix and their bases just connect because they are broken and insecure in the same ways. And together, they are complete. (I SORRY EVEN MY TEACHER SAID I HAVE BAD METAPHORS.) The fact that you wrote both perspectives makes me love them even more because my heart aches to know just how much they care about each other and it's like... I dunno, relief through the pain I know they're gonna go through because life's a bitch.

Okay. Sleep. I really love you for this. OGAWD I wish I had my phone back I want to Line you so badly.