Scattered Vertebrae (II)

[countingcr0ws]

Title: Scattered Vertebrae
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot, Sequel ( 1 | 2 )
Genre: AU, Generally Happy, Lucid, Slice of Life
Summary: Jaejoong finds himself walking on a thin line, wondering if having nothing, or nothing, is better.

Comments

[countingcr0ws]

/ducks because of endless compliments. I guess I'm still super concerned about the part about repetition and I really wanted to make it not feel like you're reading the same thing again but I'm not sure to what extent of differentiation is possible and I actually spotted a few mistakes and that is a concern but I swear that the draft I sent you was like ten times worse like I was literally cringing like one line into it and I was like omgosh, no. Anyway, omg. Haha. I just scrolled up for things to reply to, but I don't know how because I'm terrible with compliments, haha. And I actually kinda prefer this one more too because I had to mess the first one up and it reads funny now, idk. Haha. This is dumbed down and easy to read. Hahahaha. And omg. Introspective. Are you serious! Have you read my shoujo one shot about boyfriends, omg haha. But. I'll take it and you don't get it when I say that I'm thankful that you liked it, haha. You're like the max standard, and I swear that like If you hate something even, throw it at me and I'll improve. Hahahaha. And man, I've missed your comments. :o

[ligerliger]

Claudia you are too sweet ;~; /clings/ I really liked it!!! & the repetition was fine for me at least--it served as a reminder of the scene but enough so that I would understand the perspective of the other person involved. it was awesome!