Scattered Vertebrae (II)

[countingcr0ws]

Title: Scattered Vertebrae
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot, Sequel ( 1 | 2 )
Genre: AU, Generally Happy, Lucid, Slice of Life
Summary: Jaejoong finds himself walking on a thin line, wondering if having nothing, or nothing, is better.

Comments

[dilovesyunjae]

Awww these 2 are so precious!!!! ♥♥♥

[countingcr0ws]

AHAHAHAH. For a moment I was like how. Why. Then I tried to recall the ending. Then I burst out laughing because what. Hahahaha. WHAT. HAHAHAHA. ARE YOU SERIOUS. THEY WERE BEING SO STUPID AND CONTRARY, ZOMG. AHHAHA. I guess you liked how aggravating they were. Haha. Crap. I'm still giggling.

[dilovesyunjae]

Thats why I told u they're so precious. So stupid and so in love with each other but tpo scared to confess. Aigoo. I wana smack their heads and then give them a big bear hug. Lols

[lrao]

I really, really love this. I hadn't read the first one so I just did that before heading to this one. It's sweet how much each thinks about the other, to the point of over-thinking and analyzing every single detail and movement. It was really nice to see this from both of their Povs. I know this is a sequel to a one-shot but I'd really love if you could expand this so we can see what happens afterwards. I'm so, so glad Jae took a leap of faith (Jaejoong IRL is all about keeping faith, no?) here. :) Wishing them the best. Thanks for this chapter!

[countingcr0ws]

HEY! was there an obvious repetition? Haha. Like when you read the first and the second did it feel like you were reading the same story twice. Haha. I like people to yell at me. Like seriously. Omg. That's so masochistic. But I need people to question and challenge me, so hahahaha. Be like yeah, it was a hideously excruciating read and it was a complete repetition tbh. And point out some places and I'd be like tripping over myself to make it better. Heh. I mean seriously. Gosh. I love that you read it in one sitting, lol. Lol. Eh. That's approximately twenty pages on ms word. Heehee.

[lrao]

No lol! I didn't even realize it was the same time as the other until the second part just because the JJ here is so diff from the JJ from Yunho's pov xD And because it was so different, it didn't feel tiresome at all :D And LOL I can read YJ fanfics at the speed of light but it takes me hours to get through my school reading OTL

[beya3x]

Lovely! I read both at once. <3
It made my heart flutter after they finally said what they felt to each other ;;

[countingcr0ws]

Haha. Thank you. Was it too weird. Like you know how sometimes when you read parallel perspectives and it feels like you're practically reading the same story twice and I tried to avoid that but was it hard to read like was there a lot of repetition? I kinda need/ should write another perspective story so it'd be great (I have the urge to type gr8) if you smacked me now if it sucked. The harder the better. Yeahhhh.

[marslokaret]

So cute~ ^.^

And here I am, thinking Yunho was just some COMMON office guy with a common paycheck!
Really, he sounds very down to earth that I didn't get that he was seriously rich until this chapter..
Anyhoo~ I can totally see that personality in RealLife!Yunho...

And ohmeegash! I can't believe jae was just as insecure as yunho too (maybe it has something to do on how they first met?)

Both of them are very very very very melodramatic!!!(but I won't have it any other way) :)
And over all it turns out great for them so YEY! C:

And ahm, this verse is really interesting ^_^ can we please have some more ^0^
With yunho singing along during jae's concert or better yet office!sex ^\\\^
Whahaha, but really it's up to you ^.^ thank you for this second chapter!

[countingcr0ws]

Gosh. I just want to die, idk. As in when I wrote I guess I left a lot of spaces for the other perspective so there is actually material for a second chapter but ugh. Not cool. Haha. I guess I was really insecure about this and omg. You're like super freaking nice like half the time I can't even type a single coherent sentence to conjure a comment when I read stuff and I just go like haha. That was cute and stuff. Hahahaha. /ducks out of sight. But yeah. /shrugs. I actually started on Yunho's perspective for Paper Lies but it got bumped down I guess. Haha. Not too motivated bla bla. And you're like super freaking nice, let us make a blanket fort together. Hahahahaha.

[countingcr0ws]

So I was thinking about your statement like why they're both so insecure. I guess because like when we think of the entertainment industry, its flamboyant, extravagant and lavish. So like Yunho comes from the corporate world, where its all straight laced analytics and management. So like Jaejoong's this glitter unicorn that he has lured into his garden and he doesn't know how to make him stay. And whereas for Jaejoong being a person in the industry he sees and is often faced with the prejudices of artistes and idols in a sense and how fickle and volatile the consumers are. And he thrives on flamboyance which is kinda not foolproof so erm to him Yunho is this all capable business man that has things more serious to worry, concern and deal with and the things that he does is so intangible like he just is intimidated. Hahahaha. So yeah. So they kinda both feel insecure. Haha. I think I repeated like a sentence about the career variation part. Heh. I'm on the app right now so I can't copy, but it goes something the things the do for a

[countingcr0ws]

Haha. I'm ducking at the late post. Haha. I guess I was really busy and I'm glad that you liked it! Gosh. I'm actually really insecure about this because I'm writing so many single perspective stories right now and I will have to write the other perspective and idk how great it'd be like the response and yeah. Haha. (Its not too great, lol) thank you for dropping by! Ugh. /drops dead.