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SMF: EOSAI (Part 2)

Nov 18, 2007 09:16

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sonic the hedgehog, video games, sega, smf: eosai, krr

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countchooch November 18 2007, 15:22:00 UTC

Suggestions for this fanfic, please!

countchooch November 18 2007, 18:47:09 UTC

Nevermind. It's being called Sana Mahgerto Flippino: The Essence of Space in or Around Italy. Courtesy of NK.

verily_thesky November 19 2007, 01:14:49 UTC

i suggest you stop using big font and bold letters

also i'm expecting an idort reference later

countchooch November 19 2007, 01:36:41 UTC

B-But I like big font and bold letters...

And yes I was planning on having a "NO YOU DON'T, IDORT!" moment.

verily_thesky November 19 2007, 02:49:31 UTC

this had so much potential but pretty much failed in terms of description

you could do something like EEJ USES A PSP FOR WATCHING FINAL FANTASY. EEJ USES THE DS FOR SLICING HIS WRIST

and then an idort popping up or something with the classy "LOL NO YOU DON'T IDORT"

countchooch November 19 2007, 04:27:18 UTC

This really wasn't supposed to have 4chan memes scattered through the whole thing. It's only supposed to be tied into what the 4chan clan does.

verily_thesky November 19 2007, 04:52:29 UTC

Yeah.

I wish to say, though, that having a 4chan clan is somewhat too forced (even though I did it in an earlier comment to be a spoof or something) in a real story. Maybe that's because I like the spectator side-effect, or just because I like subtleties more (although I never convey it into actual writing, because I'm an idiot!)

Is there more 4chan clan action going on or something?

countchooch November 19 2007, 12:25:05 UTC

The 4chan clan probably won't be in the next part, but they'll be back.

verily_thesky November 20 2007, 04:38:40 UTC

THEY'RE WATCHING YOU, EEJ.
THEY'RE WATCHING YOU GET THAT MOBIAN DISEASE.
THEN, YOU'RE FUCKED.

BECAUSE NOBODY ESCAPES WEEGEE.
NOBODY.

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