Following the lead of my colleague who reviewed the New Who Novels category, I decided to read the first three parts of each WIP and then give my opinions. Anyone who has read more of any of the stories should feel free to comment on them, of course.
Stuck on the Slow Path by sarkywoman
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IMO, this category is pretty weak, what with all of the poor punctuation, mid-series stories, Gwen bashing, unengaging plots, and questionable characterization. I'm trying to decide whether to vote for a flawed story that had some strengths and held my attention, a technically proficient story that didn't "connect" with me, or possibly nothing.
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It's also possible this just didn't click with me at all because I'm reading a romance novel called Flowers From the Storm with exactly this plot, with added Quakers (heroine comes to work at an asylum, is horrified at the conditions the hero is being kept in and effects a rescue...)
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Yeah, I suppose that's especially the case with it being posted as a WIP (which I completely failed to notice until I skipped to the last chapter, despite it being noted in both this category's title and the first paragraph of the post: ten points for observation, brain) - if you want to build a readership you probably don't have time for a couple of chapters of the main character being only ambiguously good or letting a character the readers are invested in suffer. The OC - Gage? - seems to have a more realistic response to Jack, where he feels sorry for him and guilty about his own involvement, but does nothing to actually help him because it'd be risking his own neck. I liked that character, actually.
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