blurred lines

[cosmicanomaly]

Title: blurred lines
Pairing: minsu, yoosu
Rating: g
Length: one-shot
Prompt: water by standbymi
Summary: Changmin is an expert in self-denial.

A/N: Writer's block is eating me up inside out so yesterday, I forced myself to finally open up ms word and spit out some word vomit lol and here it is. Shitload of thanks to kratynoi, sephystabbity and safiew for their tolerance

Comments

[kratynoi]

MARY-AMMMM!!! ;A; OMGGG!!!!!!

This, I can't, omg~ this is gorgeous~~~ I know I keep telling you, but really truly, I LOVE your writing. I don't know how to describe it. It's like meandering in a stream occasionally punctuated with rocks. Like, it flows so beautifully from one thought to another and connects the concrete with the metaphorical and it's beautiful~~~.

Somewhere along the line, the feather light kisses of water on his face are joined by an unfamiliar sting in his eyes that feels suspiciously like falling in love. ;A;
So many lines to pick out. I really love them all. And you just KILLED me at the end with that quote. TT

(and no I still don't understand my role in all this. you just copied, I squealed, and that's it)

[cosmicanomaly]

Lol tbh I think your feedback makes more sense than my writing 'cause going back with a fresh mind, I find that I can't even re-read this stuff without wondering why I chose to let some sentences get so long that I can't remember what I'd even meant to say in the beginning lolll. BUT CAN YOU JUST. LEND ME SOME MOTIVATION omg I have so many belated birthday fics I'd meant to write and urgh LAZY.

Your very existence is a form of support, okay? Sobs. Thank you. I love you. ;3;

[lemonademelon]

I love how you always write how deeply, desperately in love Changmin is over Junsu :') and that's one of my favorite MinSu there at the end :')

[cosmicanomaly]

=D It's one of my absolute favorites too (I mean. Second to desperate Junsu 'cause seeing bias in emotional anguish is the highest form of pleasure I can derive from my sadism), and I find that it isn't done often enough to my liking so I figured hey, what's the harm? ;D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[krissylovessu]

This is so naisu ♥♥♥♥♥ but heartbreakingly sad for changmin :(
Although u ship yoosu hard, i wanted the minsu to happen in thia fic :(
I really like this fic! Thamks for sharing! :)

[cosmicanomaly]

Not gonna' lie, yoosu and minsu are my two favorite pairings, which made it so hard for me to decide how to end this. But I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

[chrome_hearted]

wonderful~ as always TT^TT

[cosmicanomaly]

Cries thank you so much for your support. <3

[safiew]

how do you make it flow so naturally, and the imaginary is so beautiful ((????? english helP), how do you pick up the right words, i hate you
and it hurts so good give my bias a break you h0

"And sometimes the music walks him down a nostalgic path, singing to him of home and warmth and almost love, and Changmin shuts his eyes to pretend it really is, pretends he can see his dreams emerge into life and taste the heat that lines the stars he used to see in the clear night skies. Fingers wrap around his wrist, unrelenting like a chain, and drag him reeling back to the ground. He tries to stand tall, tries to fight free, but he ends up captive in the stars dancing in Junsu’s eyes. He slips and he falls."
still my favorite part ;A;

[cosmicanomaly]

Lol you're way too good to me - I don't deserve this comment. ;n;