[CHAPTERFIC] Waltzes, Minuets, the Whole Lot Chapter 2/3 (Axis Powers Hetalia)

[cosmic_dare]

Title: Waltzes, Minuets, the Whole Lot [ Writing Journal Chapter One ] [FF.NET LINK]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Word Count: 3,294
Summary: America and England are invited to a ball put on by France, but America discovers that he's more than a bit rusty on the art of fine dancing. Luckily for him, he can always

Comments

[twistedsheets10]

Oh AMERICA. ♥

This is just lovely. ♥

[midori_lover]

♥ I love this fic. <3
I'll wait for the last part :D

[historyblitz]

He froze there. “It’s just a dance, England.” But in the heat of the smoky hall, with the music blaring around him and drowning out almost every other sound, America’s blue eyes connected with England’s green eyes. He felt his cheeks grow hot.

“Just a dance.” England turned his face away. America did the same.

“Definitely just a dance,” America agreed, confused by the huskiness of his voice.

“The music’s stopped,” England whispered.

This was my favorite bit. I love how you write these two. =D

[susan_chan]

aaah!! it finished at the most interesting part XD when they were getting closer and closer XD
i cant wait for the continue! "The Ball"
i luv you for this fic :D

[harosketch]

Brilliant. America and England's interactions were handled delicately, and they were very much IC. I love the beauty of this fic. I shall await the next part.