Comments | cosmic_dare: [DRABBLES] Two AmericaxEngland (Axis Powers Hetalia)

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[DRABBLES] Two AmericaxEngland (Axis Powers Hetalia)

May 03, 2009 23:05

Here's the fourth of several sets of Hetalia drabbles. I'm offering requests in my lj, and these are the results so far.

Prompt: The Morning After [ FF.NET ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor/Romance
Word Count: 718
Summary: America and England wake up one morning in an... interesting situation. [For technoranma]

( They had no earthly idea why they were even there... )

character: england, fanfic: drabble, fanfic collection: special relationship, fanfic, pairing: americaxengland, character: canada, fandom: axis powers hetalia, character: america

Comments 27

technoranma May 4 2009, 04:25:04 UTC

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! OMG YES!!!! *just got back from a Bachelorette party weekend annd wtf this is 100X BETTERRR*!! In a jail cell. Oh shit that is fabulous!! :D!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

haro May 18 2009, 04:18:54 UTC

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT.

♥ you forever.

harosketch May 6 2009, 12:04:50 UTC

HAHAHAHA YES. OH YES. These are both awesome. The very thought of them both getting drunk, then just having sex wherever is highly amusing... the very idea made me laugh uncontrollably. And you wrote the situation so well.

The only very small critism is your word choice - "sidewalk" is very American, and it's basically unused in British-English. If this is set in England, I think "pavement" would be more appropriate. I'm sorry for being finicky, hope you don't mind. Other than that, the first drabble is superb, and I don't say that lightly~!

The second drabble is also really good, so cute! I can imagine America doing that, then probably falling for Canada as well LOL

harosketch May 6 2009, 18:23:34 UTC

I just realised that although "sidewalk" = "pavement", it would sound better/more formal to change "public sidewalk" to "pedestrian area" in context. That would sound more British as well.

Sorry about this... ehheh... It's probably because I am English and never been to America. ;_; I can answer any other questions about British slang if you'd like, seeing as you're in America.

haro May 18 2009, 04:25:52 UTC

I've got a Britpicker for "You Can't Take the Sky From Me," but if you ever see anything in my fic that you feel should be changed, do feel free to let me know! Thanks.

harosketch May 18 2009, 09:30:00 UTC

Okay, glad you don't mind! Sorry :P

Thread 6

dropsofgleam May 21 2009, 01:59:54 UTC

Oh, my. America, so funny in the first one and so adorable in the second. And both England and Canada are just *awesome*

haro May 22 2009, 06:50:06 UTC

Thanks a lot! I love all three of those boys.

supertobi May 21 2009, 04:11:32 UTC

And now, everytime I hear Gordon Brown's name I will LOL really hard and no one will know why xD

THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME. I LOOK FORWARD TO ALL OF YOUR FICS BECAUSE YOU ROCK SO HARD. ♥

haro May 22 2009, 06:53:41 UTC

Poor Obama has already had to deal with these two in a couple of my fics, so I thought it fair to give Gordon Brown a turn.

THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME. I LOOK FORWARD TO ALL OF YOUR FICS BECAUSE YOU ROCK SO HARD. ♥

*blushes profusely.* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

supertobi May 23 2009, 20:29:32 UTC

I know.. I love it when you throw Obama into the insanity; it makes it more real (and funnier because he has to put up with their crap xD BUT I'D PUT UP WITH IT ANY DAY ♥)

YOUR WELCOME BTW (>3<)b

susan_chan May 21 2009, 05:55:55 UTC

waah:D these wereeegoood:D
both ones:D
that public sex thing XD omg XD i would have died from the embarassment XD...hahah XD

haro May 22 2009, 06:55:45 UTC

Yes, poor America and England. Thanks so much!