Fringe Ficlet: Rule Seventeen

Jun 06, 2011 13:19

Title: Rule Seventeen
Fandom: Fringe (I know... a non-PotC or RH fic?  What happened?  Fringe ate a bit of my brain, that's what.)
Characters: Walter and Peter
Rating: Um.... PG for mild discussion of ickiness?
Word Count: 442
Disclaimer: Not mine, not making any profit.
Summary: Walter doesn't understand the rules.

Inside the house, Mrs. Dolores Kimball was still crying. )

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rainer76 June 7 2011, 03:33:06 UTC
“That… must be one of Astrid’s,” Peter said.  “Not the one I was going for, but definitely applicable here.”

lol. Brilliant, there's not enough Walter and Peter fic in this fandom

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corrielle June 7 2011, 18:22:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked, since it was my first try writing for this fandom.

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starg8fans June 7 2011, 03:42:47 UTC
Thanks for this, it was great. I"m just re-watching S1, and I realized how much I miss this kind of exchange between those two. Walter's candid comments and Peter's exasperated attempts to control them were too funny.

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corrielle June 7 2011, 18:26:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm pretty new to the fandom, and as of yesterday when I wrote this, I'd seen up to "Brown Betty." AFTER I wrote it, I sat down and watched all three episodes at the end of season 2. Yeah... I'm... glad I wrote this first. It would have been pretty hard to rewind my brain to the happier place it needed to be...

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starmack June 7 2011, 10:19:22 UTC
Ah, this is perfect! Totally Walter and Peter. Fantastic!

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corrielle June 7 2011, 18:26:39 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad they sounded like some version of themselves. ;-)

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elliestories June 7 2011, 18:02:02 UTC
This was such a wonderfully in character snippet of Walter and Peter interaction!

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corrielle June 7 2011, 18:27:37 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you think I got their voices right. Writing Walter is... fun, but challenging.

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meridian_rose June 7 2011, 18:07:43 UTC
Fantastic, believable, in character for all three of them if we count off screen Astrid. I love how Peter's rule is much simpler and to the point :D

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corrielle June 7 2011, 18:33:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad they worked for you. I hadn't even thought about Astrid being in character... but I suppose she IS the one who usually has to listen to Walter go on about how fantastic the corpses filled with disgusting creatures are... ;-)

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