Five at His Fingertips [2/2]

[corpsematerial]

Title: Five at His Fingertips
Author: corpsematerial (Jane)
Rating: Dimming it to a PG-13 for NAUGHTY WORDS.
Pairing: Rydon, Joncer, only not so much anymore...
POV: Third-person varying
Summary: Two is company. Four is a band. But five is a homicidal maniac. So five? Meet four.
Disclaimer: GOD.
Author Notes: An unspecified apology, maybe...?

Part One

Comments

[corpsematerial]

Thank you!

Phase one of my evil plan is complete >D.

[corpsematerial]

Thank you!

This was kind of an experiment to see if film grammar would translate over into written work, because I study animation, and I was kind of hoping to get a movie-feel with the allusions to lighting and camera angle and framing o.o xDD.

Anyway! Thank you for the friending <3, and the lovely comment, and keep writing or else D< ;P. Because I'll be over there. Making sure you do. Seriously.

[i_heart_cliches]

wooooooow. :O That was so so so good. I really loved reading it. Your writing style for this was amazing. :D I started suspecting that maybe someone had a multiple personality disorder towards the middle of this, but even your ending was surprising. I loved it. :)

[corpsematerial]

Thank you!

And I was trying to hint towards it without being too obvious, so - yay! xDD

[corpsematerial]

Thank you!

I started with the ending, really, and worked my way backwards xDD.

I don't think I recommend working that way... ;P

[streetstars]

THAT, was real fucking brilliant.

[corpsematerial]

Thank you very much!