ZOMG! I loved this fic to bits! The Ed/win, the Al/Paninya, the royai!
“Kiss the girls and get in the damn truck!” Mustang added from somewhere, probably inside the vehicle." ----that particular line sent me into a fit of giggles for reasons unknown to me. *grins* Roy's so suave isn't he?
And was the General Armstrong you're referring to Olivier? I haven't gotten to that part of the manga but I've been reading a friend's oneshot collection of her and got really excited when I saw that. She sounds like a very interesting character.
You're going to continue this in a sequel, right? Of course I don't know how you're turning out fics like at this pace as it is, but it's really open-ended. Unless maybe that's were it moves into the manga story?
I've really enjoyed this story, and I'm glad to read you'll be writing more for this group. The characterization is very good, and I really enjoy the dialogue as well as the suspenseful plot. And you always manage to make me laugh.
I hope Arakawa lets us know more about Olivia, because she's a fascinating contrast to her brother.
thanks. I'm so glad that you liked it. Yes I hope to see more with Olivia since at the moment I'm not overly fond of her character. I do plan more with this obviously since this is open ended but i'm not sure when that'll happen
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Just wanted to say that I really loved that fic and the Roy/Riza one before. Hope you write some more soon! ;-)
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“Kiss the girls and get in the damn truck!” Mustang added from somewhere, probably inside the vehicle." ----that particular line sent me into a fit of giggles for reasons unknown to me. *grins* Roy's so suave isn't he?
And was the General Armstrong you're referring to Olivier? I haven't gotten to that part of the manga but I've been reading a friend's oneshot collection of her and got really excited when I saw that. She sounds like a very interesting character.
You're going to continue this in a sequel, right? Of course I don't know how you're turning out fics like at this pace as it is, but it's really open-ended. Unless maybe that's were it moves into the manga story?
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Roy's a brat. I love him and yes I'm refering to Olivia
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[...]Winry, you need to service Ed.” Roy froze then winced. “Sorry, that sounded less perverted in my head.”
“Next to everything else in there, I’m sure it did,” Ed said sardonically.
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I hope Arakawa lets us know more about Olivia, because she's a fascinating contrast to her brother.
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...and laughed.
And couldn't remember if you'd done any more in this series.
Hmm.
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There are other side stories to this. I had planned one longer one but newer plot developments caught my attention
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