Fic- The Scent of Smoke

[cornerofmadness]

Title --The Scent of Smoke
Author-- cornerofmadness
Disclaimer -- Arakawa owns all
Rating -- teen
Characters/Pairing -- Alphonse
Word Count -- 354
Warning -- angst
Summary -- He should be able to smell smoke
Author’s Note -- written for October Third day.

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Comments

[ishte]

Nice job.  I like the full circle nature of it.

[cornerofmadness]

Thank you. Oh good, that part worked. I wondered.

[ishte]

yep.  It worked just fine for me. 

[ishte]

I tend to love stories that have this circular element to them. It also seems pretty appropriate to the FMA realm since arrays are generally circular in nature.

[evil_little_dog]

Your story and mine kind of dovetail. Which is pretty cool.

I like this a lot. There's a lot of anguish in not very many words.

[cornerofmadness]

Thank you. Yes, mine is the beginning and yours the end.

[evil_little_dog]

You're welcome!