Fic: Love Was Meant For Beauty Queens, Chapter 1

[coralfly]

Title: Love Was Meant For Beauty Queens

Pairings: Finn/Rachel, Finn/Quinn

Rating: R/NC-17

Disclaimer: Glee is the property of Twentieth Century Fox and affiliates and not mine.

Word Count: 3644

Spoilers: All of season 1. Although only in the loosest of sense as the story doesn’t really follow canonical history.

Summary: Finn and Rachel

Comments

[beeeez]

LOVE THIS.

But I want more sex.

I love this verse so much. I love how you write Finn. I love how you write Rachel. Heck, I even love how you write Quinn.

I really am enjoying this. Hopefully there is more coming?

[coralfly]

I'm very happy that you are enjoying this. Because it is partly your fault that I am writing in this verse again.

There will be more coming. There will definitely be more coming. I figure it might be 4 or 5 chapters although it depends on how plotty the story decides to be.

I have the end partly written, a chunk of middle (which may include more sex, and the story would have been all about the sex if I had my say), and it is currently a process of filling in the gaps.

Thank you so much for reading!

[coralfly]

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. You're also pretty much one of the other reasons I'm continuing with this verse. So I'm really happy that you're enjoying this!

[coralfly]

You are an incredibly awesome reader/giver of feedback. Thank you so, so much for your amazing comments.

It means a lot that you feel my story is realistic and plausible alternative despite it being AU.

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story!

[empressnerd]

[coralfly]

Thank you for reading!

I only realized after reading your comments that I had been subtly (or at least subtly to me) subverting some of Finn's and Rachel's role from season 1 i.e. the whole Swimfan thing. I guess because I envisage that if Finn had made the choice to leave glee club for good, back in the Pilot, he wouldn't have been able to let go as easily as he thought he could.

I'm also really glad that you felt I was giving you enough imagery to visualize scenes in the story. Writing Finn is so completely different from how I would normally write and I get worried that I'm doing too much telling and not enough description.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and then leaving such great feedback!

[rockerp]

That was a really great story. I'm looking forward to reading more

[coralfly]

Thanks for reading. :)