Out of Reach

Oct 02, 2010 03:31

Title: Out of Reach
Author: coquilleon
Pairing: Elena/Damon
Rating: MA
Genre: Romance
Based on: TV series
Spoilers: Season 2
Disclaimers: I do not own The Vampire Diaries.
Summary: Elation soars through his body as he takes in the picture; long dark hair cascading down a slender back that smooths out into a sensuous curve of hips. And him, standing in front of her ( Read more... )

complete, rating: ma, the vampire diaries, fanfiction, elena/damon

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traciaknows October 2 2010, 10:19:28 UTC
Good Lord. I had s feeling it was a dream- but I didn't want it to be. I think you're absolutely right about Damon not being anyone's favorite- and that's where the terrible insecurity and need in him comes from. I keep thinking this comes from his father- who I believe we'll some day see never thought Damon was his...
Great read! Thanks so much for posting.

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coquilleon October 5 2010, 00:43:51 UTC
yup, i really do think thats what it comes down to. i wasnt so sure before but after the 2x1 i was def sure. lol
thanks so much for reading

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garnet_words October 2 2010, 17:52:32 UTC
Nicely done! At one point, I was so sure that was Katherine, tricking him (and it turns out I was kinda right?) Really sensual, and great look into his mind... I really liked this.

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coquilleon October 5 2010, 00:41:52 UTC
:D
im very happy that you liked it. and I wanted it to feel dream like ( i like to think I set up a good dreamy hazy sort of atmosphere)
thanks for reading!

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strangedazey October 2 2010, 18:41:17 UTC
Man, I knew it had to be someone's dream, but I was really thinking Elena for some reason. Wonderful, love the part about Damon needing someone to pick him first. I think that sums up Damon's feelings so well.

Loved it!

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coquilleon October 5 2010, 00:40:50 UTC
im glad you enjoyed it!
and yeah ive seen lots from Elena's POV but not many from Damon. His brain is fascinating. lol
thanks for reading!

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laniaaa October 3 2010, 10:19:31 UTC
i entertained the idea that maybe, just maybe it was katherine. but then a dream sounded more plausible, even though i wanted it to be real. beautifully written, with a great look into damon's head :)

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coquilleon October 5 2010, 00:39:45 UTC
thank you.
yeah i wanted Katherine to be responsible for it in some way. And I've read so many stories of all this happening from Elena's POV, but not nearly as many from Damon. not sure why that is... :)

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persephone_20 October 4 2010, 04:08:59 UTC
Oh god, this was completely amazing. I didn't feel even the slightest bit cheated when it was revealed that it was a dream. The writing was just too good. I could see it happening for real and you've given me hope for the series! :D

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coquilleon October 5 2010, 00:38:32 UTC
yay! im glad ive given you hope lol. although I dont think I'm so far off when it comes to the actual series. I have a feeling that there might be some D/E, especially with Katherine running around

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persephone_20 October 5 2010, 00:41:24 UTC
You know, just as soon as Elena stops this silly belief that Damon has 'lost her forever'

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coquilleon October 7 2010, 04:40:00 UTC
yup!
your comment made me think. what if she did give up that silly notion? so i wrote something. ^.^ it's up now (According to Plan). hope you enjoy it !

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