Citizen Erased -- Chapter Eight

[coquette7]

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five

Comments

[angelus_buff]

OMGOMGOMG!! I just checked my journal and went into shock when I saw this posted! I'm going to go read it now, but I just had to *SQUEE* about it real quick. LOL This is so exciting!!

Glad to have you back! *HUGS* Feedback to follow soon.
~Cat~

[coquette7]

Glad to be back. ;) *hugs*

[angelus_buff]

OH WOW! Well, for being "rusty" you sure do put out an excellent chapter! LOL This was great, hun!

Loved how 'loving' Edward was with his gestures (rubbing her palm, touching her pretty much all the time, etc), I adore that about him. Can't believe he'd let her go to the taxi alone though, that doesn't make much sense. O_o

Loved her reading the journal on the plane and getting embarrased about their previous plane ride. LOL

I just plain ole love Bella. Everything about her. LOL How she sometimes talks about herself in the third person to Edward, how she felt sorry for Bella while walking through the tunnels, and how she vows to dismember Mikail for hurting Edward. *grins* You go girl! LOL

Hate the Volturi, cuz they're pricks. Especially Aro and Caius. Oh, and Jane -bitch. LOL

And OMG I LOVE the way the chapter ended!! Such an awesome way to stop it! :) I can't wait to see what happens next; how Bella gets out of her little spot of trouble, how Edward reacts, etc, etc. SO EXCITING!!! :D LOL

Anyway, I'll stop the ramble now. SO

[coquette7]

"Can't believe he'd let her go to the taxi alone though, that doesn't make much sense. O_o"

Don't worry. It will. :)

[angelus_buff]

Oh, I have total faith that all will be explained in due time. :) No worries there. And it will be awesome too, I've no doubt. LOL

[coquette7]

Thank you! :) I've posted the next chapter if you'd like to read it. It's posted here. Thanks for reviewing!