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coquette7

Citizen Erased -- Chapter Six

Aug 10, 2008 18:41

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five

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edward/bella, citizen erased

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monstercrush August 11 2008, 01:54:09 UTC

YAY! I have not read it yet but I had to send out my congrats. I will read it tonight -- I can't wait. You are truly amazing for breaking past the barrier. Truly! Yada -yada-yada - everything I've said in the past x 10!

coquette7 August 11 2008, 01:58:20 UTC

It was so difficult! ;____; (Getting easier everyday though.)

coquette7 August 12 2008, 20:53:03 UTC

The barrier must be good and broken now. I wrote 5000 words just this morning and already have the next chapter up. :D Thanks again for your encouragement.

monstercrush August 12 2008, 22:49:23 UTC

5000 words! Seriously?! This is the best news! I can't tell you how happy I am that you've conquered that road block. I knew you would but It was definitely a tough one to get over. I can't wait to read what you've done! It's perfect timing because I'm actually on a plane tonight and need something good to read. I'll print out Spiral Static and Citizen Erased and settle in for a comfy flight. It'll be fun to read E/B's flight mishap while on a plane ( ... )

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underthishaze August 11 2008, 01:59:37 UTC

yay, you updated!
to be honest I loved Spiral Static and now this story MUCH better than Breaking Dawn. seriously. your writing is more like what I expected BD to be, but the book didn't live up.
can't wait to read more :)

aici_rua August 11 2008, 10:51:10 UTC

BD doesn't exist for me :D Spiral Static is like... the last book in the series for ~me~

coquette7 August 12 2008, 20:57:46 UTC

Thank you! :) if you'd like to continue the story, I just posted chapter 7 here. Thank you for leaving a comment!

nightsoftamara August 11 2008, 02:01:38 UTC

Yay! New chapter!

I love how you've written Evil!Vampire. He's so delightfully creepy. I was surprised that his eyes were gold - he doesn't seem like the vegetarian type. Were they like that the first time Bella met him? Must go re-read...

And poor Edward. The first time he can hear Bella's thoughts is when she's being menaced by Evil!Vampire.

coquette7 August 11 2008, 15:29:40 UTC

Were they like that the first time Bella met him?

Yup! *grin* Gray-area villains are so much more interesting to me. ;)

coquette7 August 12 2008, 20:58:14 UTC

Thank you! :) if you'd like to continue the story, I just posted chapter 7 here. Thank you for leaving a comment!

dansunedisco August 11 2008, 02:03:30 UTC

I have to admit, your reason for Bella being able to control her newborn thirst is much more convincing than Meyer's. I really love this story! You've stayed so true to the characters. :)

coquette7 August 12 2008, 20:58:29 UTC

Thank you! :) if you'd like to continue the story, I just posted chapter 7 here. Thank you for leaving a comment!

ibelievemyheart August 11 2008, 02:06:31 UTC

I like the way you've tackled the shield concept. In many ways, it makes more sense to me than the way SM did it. I also like your uber-sexy evildoer. :)

coquette7 August 12 2008, 20:58:48 UTC

Thank you! :) if you'd like to continue the story, I just posted chapter 7 here. Thank you for leaving a comment!