Spiral Static -- Part Nine

Jul 15, 2008 14:55

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight

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edward/bella, spiral static

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angelus_buff July 15 2008, 22:38:35 UTC
OMG SO GOOD! And I'm thrilled that the update came so soon! WOW!

Glad to see all the Cullen's make an appearance. And OMG I love Alice! When she yelled to Bella that she was glad she wasn't dead, I laughed so hard. She's such a great character. LOL

Tons of little moments that made me literally go 'awwwww' (-out loud too! LOL) but these are my favorites:

-He smiled down at me - finally, a real smile - but it was sad and reflective. “You brave little girl, you,” he whispered, touching the planes of my cheek.

-Again he smoothed my hair back, tracing his hand down my cheek and neck as if he were framing my face. “You can just look at me and lift me up when I’m at my very lowest.”

-"I love you so much, Edward. I don’t tell you that enough, do I?”
His eyes cracked open to look at me. “Only every time I hear you say my name, love.” *flails* GAH! LOL

I love this fic so much, and while on one hand I'm thrilled that we're going to see the conclusion in the next chapter, part of me is terribly sad about that too. :( I don't want it to end! *cries*

Anyway, wonderful job! Best.fic.ever! :D

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:38:35 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! :) That was a fun chapter to write. Probably my favorite. The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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