LJ Idol Season 9, Week 14: "Confession from the Chair"

Jul 10, 2014 06:52


"Hallelujah"

The king was pacing around the throne room, muttering to himself, when the messenger arrived. As the king turned to face him, the servant quickly dropped to one knee. "Your Highness."

"What is it?" the king asked, clearly making an effort to calm himself down.

"A message from the Queen," he said, handing a scroll to one of the guards, ( Read more... )

straight and narrow, pen to paper

Leave a comment

Comments 35

ryl July 10 2014, 17:40:09 UTC
I love what you've done with the lyrics here!

Reply

copyright1983 July 11 2014, 01:05:59 UTC
Credit unmowngrass for coming up with the song in our brainstorming session. I just ran with it. :) Thanks for reading!

Reply


mac_arthur_park July 10 2014, 21:50:06 UTC
Wow. Powerful.

Reply

copyright1983 July 11 2014, 01:06:06 UTC
Thanks for reading! :)

Reply


eska818 July 11 2014, 06:53:07 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this, it's quite creative, and I liked how much emotion you were able to get into a short piece.

Reply

copyright1983 July 13 2014, 02:05:11 UTC
:) Thanks for reading!

Reply


unmowngrass July 11 2014, 15:21:15 UTC
Wow, I love the angle you've taken with this, honey! Not quite the one I had in mind at the time, well done!! <3 <3 <3 <3

Reply

copyright1983 July 13 2014, 02:05:20 UTC
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Reply


elledanger July 12 2014, 15:45:52 UTC
I liked this!

Reply

copyright1983 July 13 2014, 02:05:28 UTC
:) Thanks for reading!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up