LJ Idol Season 8, Week 25: "Closer"

[copyright1983]

"Who Are You?"

A lot of my job is research, digging deep to find out who people are. In this case, the person I was digging on was me, and the research material was the back of my eyelids. It wasn't very stimulating reading.

The knock on the door interrupted me. "Come in," I called. The door opened to reveal a goblin looking dirtier than last week's

Comments

[lawchicky]

Oooh, like this a lot!

[copyright1983]

Had a feeling you might. :) Thanks for reading!

[medleymisty]

Murder by death is the most awesome tag I've seen, I think.

I love how your character's voice and perspective is so different from lrig_rorrim's narrator. I also like all the little noir bits, especially the clever bits like "a fox that would make a hunter drop his bow for good" and "A dive Jacques Cousteau wouldn't survive." :)

[copyright1983]

I *think* I might have stolen the tag from a short film some friends made once.

That last line you mentioned was inspired by a different noir parody I saw once, which mentioned "a dive lower than scuba gear can go." :)

As always, thanks for reading!

[basric]

OOOOO I liked it. Well done.

[copyright1983]

:) Thanks for reading!

[lrig_rorrim]

I just wanted to say again how much much I like this! You set such a deliciously fun and dark tone. Thanks for helping bring Carre-Four to life with me. :)

[copyright1983]

:) See my comment on your post.

[alien_infinity]

I liked this one a lot! :)

[copyright1983]

:) Thanks for reading!