Why do I do these things...

[ex_hitokiri]

Well, I have some crappy ficcage. I started it then had to finish because I felt I should

Comments

[darkeyedwolf]

Dude. This is incredible. I was grinning through the entire thing -- Kakashi's self-proclaimed mid-life crisis, his obsession with Sasuke's hips, the kiss, "he's adjusting" and THE SMILEY FACE BOXERS, and, of course, most of all, bleary-eyed, mussy-headed "the more I enjoy it the harder I bite" Sasuke. Technically, I'm thinking this is nothing but some introspective and a little action at the end, but it feels like so much more, through all the details and memories and the way you flawlessly blended the past with the present (Kakashi remembering things as he showered, reflecting while making coffee, etc etc).

Sure, the boy looked like a harmless kitten when he was asleep, acted like a prissy cat when awake, but concerning all things sexual, he behaved like a deranged female lion in heat, constantly biting and clawing every inch of his teacher’s skin.

ROFL. I do believe, sex aside, a "prissy kitten" is the best description of Sasuke I've ever read.

All Sasuke had to say for himself was a mere turn of the head and muttering of, “

[ex_hitokiri]

Thank you so, so, so much for the very detailed review. Was very kind. I wish I could make this a weekly habit as I'm really starting to enjoy writing about Kakashi and Sasuke. Unfortunately, my classes start tomorrow-grr. Probably won't have as much time as I currently do.

But anywho, I really thought long and hard about how Sasuke would act in bed. It's very sad, but my mind gets preoccupied with bizarre details -_-;; Glad you enjoyed the interpretation.

[kyaa]

So, so much love for this.

And I agree whole-heartedly to all of the above comment. ESPECIALLY the "prissy kitten" description. Hee!!

[ex_hitokiri]

Thanks! Ah, if only I could draw fanart.

[vlvtnightmare]

That was sooo good.

The image of a nude, mussed, lean body soft from sleep, Sasuke draped over Kakashi's lap is so damn sexy. It's feeding so many dirty thoughts at the moment, it's like the story did contain a smut scene. Happy Birthday indeed! Kakashi is damn lucky.

Delicious hip imagery, Steamy kiss, Lovable Kakashi and Kakashi-thoughts. And I find Sasuke calling Kakashi a pervert like that ubearably cute. =3 A wonderful treat right before bed! This'll be sure to leave me with sweet dreams tonight.

And Sasuke is definitely the prissy kitten. And he should wander around the house naked all the time. ::drools::

I really wanted to write them in a more mature and already sexual relationship

Yes, please. An older Sasuke with Kakashi is what I like too. At least I think. I really haven't read enough of it to know, now have I? XP But I know I want to see more!

[ex_hitokiri]

^_^ And here I thought nobody would enjoy the older Sasuke. I don't have a problem with shota, but was just curious as to how their relationship would fair if they were older. (semi-post-pubescent Sasuke!)

[maya_slash]

HEHEHEH.
Finally some smut! And high-quality smut, at that. XDXD

[ex_hitokiri]

Still working my way up to more smut, but mostly working on characterization 'cause OoC smut isn't as yummy.

[codevixen]

Yummy, adorable, sexy, and well-written. I pretty much agree with everyone about your imagery with Sasuke. :3 <3

[ex_hitokiri]

Thankyouthankyouthankyou.