Burning Man

Aug 24, 2009 23:09

Title: Burning Man
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sheppard, team
Warnings: No major spoilers
Recipient: kriadydragon
Prompt: Sheppard H/C; Sheppard in a humiliating/overwhelming situation (not non-con or gender-switch), but one that isn't funny, and the team or one of the team having to stand up for him or, at least, try to make him more comfortable (can be on ( Read more... )

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tridget August 25 2009, 06:37:37 UTC
Oh, poor Shep. He would indeed be embarassed by being so completely helpless. Very, very, very good whump. I loved when the team rallied around John to make sure he was protected from the visit by the Chief Elder. John trying to find a way to ask Rodney to stay with him and Rodney actually getting it at the end was very sweet.

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:10:36 UTC
Thank you! John has always struck me as someone who is very careful about being in control of himself, so to lose that control and have it witnessed by others would be mortifying. Glad you enjoyed it!

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kriadydragon August 25 2009, 07:18:26 UTC
*Jumps up and down* Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh I loved it! I love helpless Sheppard, and his team not only taking care of him but protecting his dignity as well. This is so what I've been craving and you've satisfied that craving wonderfully. Thank you, thank you, thank you :D

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:11:49 UTC
Yay!! So glad you liked it! When I saw your post asking for a story with a similar prompt, I was really hoping that this is what you were looking for. Thanks!

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padawan_aneiki August 25 2009, 14:05:09 UTC
Fab! :) :) :) I think that pretty well wraps it up right there. :)

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:12:00 UTC
Thank you! :)

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drufan August 25 2009, 14:09:24 UTC
Hee-hee-hee! I'm squealing with delight. Wonderful story. Good characters, good whump, and team! Great way to start the day. :D

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:12:31 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it!

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wildcat88 August 25 2009, 20:44:58 UTC
*happy sigh* Just what I needed - Shep whump and team love. Makes everything better.

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coolbreeze1 August 26 2009, 02:12:53 UTC
It really does make everything better, doesn't it? Glad you liked it. :D

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